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Attention of a Universe

Time is a parse of moments – each life a chronicle of ticks and tocks, our deeper mystery often obscured by the clang of our clutter – we live by terms like stops and starts... the in and out racket of hearts – truth somewhere impaled amidst the overlooked silence, shouted down by riotous echoes

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/11/2022 11:40:00 AM

Caught up in the hustle and bustle of of lives, we can lose sight of what's important, Joe. Your poem is a wonderful reminder of the truth within the silence. Best of wishes, Evelyn

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/11/2022 2:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Evelyn. Have a great day! Joe.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/10/2022 10:24:00 PM

Hark the whiskers of blissful silence! Thanks for bring this to our attention, Joe :)

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/11/2022 6:44:00 AM

Thank you, my friend; have a great day! Joe.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/10/2022 6:13:00 PM

Wow! What a profound write, Joe! I love the way you've presented Time, Truth, and Silence. Certainly the clutter of our lives blocks the Truth from emerging. ~ Tick-Tock...

Joe Dimino
Date: 2/10/2022 7:26:00 PM

Hi Gershon; if we seek truth only, all else will be provided...anything one's heart could desire...and not one speck would be mere noisy clutter. Thank you my friend. Joe.