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Attention

wind whispers her inattention as I stand staring at you looking into an open window that doesn't seem to be breathing any air i reach for your pureness imagining what could appear the hollow of the daylight hidden in the darkness attempting to disappear I stroke your amiable cheek kissing you softly without hesitation nor fear the keys on the piano play in the background alternating from black then white alluring, as darkness is to light a sensual serenity succumbing to feeling, we both know is right your head rests upon my shoulder I whisper my attention holding on forever tight

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Date: 10/11/2022 2:34:00 AM
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Date: 10/14/2022 6:22:00 AM
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/11/2022 4:34:00 PM
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Date: 10/11/2022 2:41:00 AM
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:14:00 PM
"the keys on the piano play in the background alternating from black then white alluring, as darkness is to light" Great imagery.
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Date: 9/28/2022 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Joe...a great name shared by my eldest son who is in law school
Date: 9/26/2022 5:08:00 PM
I really like the "window that doesn't seem to be breathing any air!" perfect hiatus with expectation; what comes next? Elizabeth
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Date: 9/28/2022 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth

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