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Attaining Perfection

Perfection is not secondary You must primarily work on it To accomplish all of your goals And finish with everything correct Russell Sivey

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Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/14/2011 1:18:00 AM

Very nice Russell. It was kind of you to comment and yes it is sad. I lost my son some time ago but that is always a fresh wound that opened when I received more sad news. My youngest brother is dying. I have lost four older borthers over the years and he is my last. But I will survive. Love, Joyce

Don Johnson

Date: 8/13/2011 8:23:00 PM

Good point mate. Sounds about right, perfect i aint, always in strife, nah, don't suck on paint, poor galah me:)

Judy Ball

Date: 8/13/2011 5:54:00 PM

Very well done my friend with sound advice. Too bad most people expect perfection from everyone but themselves. Good write here. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2011 5:53:00 PM

Creative and meaningful expressions, Russell

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2011 12:19:00 PM

rated S for supremely superb saying, russel... so well-done! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/13/2011 11:56:00 AM

and also with an A plus for life Russell.. wonderful creative lines which speaks volumes to the reader luv.. thankxx for this tremendous write..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/13/2011 11:25:00 AM

Bravo well said my friend,,,,Michael