Attaining Perfection

Perfection is not secondary You must primarily work on it To accomplish all of your goals And finish with everything correct Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 14, 2011 at 1:18 AM
Very nice Russell. It was kind of you to comment and yes it is sad. I lost my son some time ago but that is always a fresh wound that opened when I received more sad news. My youngest brother is dying. I have lost four older borthers over the years and he is my last. But I will survive. Love, Joyce
Johnson Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Good point mate. Sounds about right, perfect i aint, always in strife, nah, don't suck on paint, poor galah me:)
Ball Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Very well done my friend with sound advice. Too bad most people expect perfection from everyone but themselves. Good write here. God Bless, JB
Mehta Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 5:53 PM
Creative and meaningful expressions, Russell
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August 13, 2011 at 12:19 PM
rated S for supremely superb saying, russel... so well-done! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 11:56 AM
and also with an A plus for life Russell.. wonderful creative lines which speaks volumes to the reader luv.. thankxx for this tremendous write..luv..
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August 13, 2011 at 11:25 AM
Bravo well said my friend,,,,Michael
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