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Attack Alas Alack of Snack

Fishy and Medusa like
moves subtle in piscean flight

Slower than darting eyes
small mammals increase your size

Shady (steak out) waiting
cold smooth incalculable expectant satiating

For Carolyn Devonshire's attack contest!!

Copyright © Joe Maverick | Year Posted 2011

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Daver Austin Date: 11/11/2012 10:52:00 AM This goes very well with a fifth of Old Sunnybrook or some vintage wine. Love, daver Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 6/8/2012 3:28:00 PM Oh, I think I might understand this now, Joe? About a person under the sign of Pisces?? Does no sound like a kind soul.:( He had certainly feasted on the guts of others. Oh well, bad him! Best wishes, Love, Mikki Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/20/2012 4:54:00 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/24/2011 12:27:00 AM JOE, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! VERY INTERESTING...Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/31/2011 11:54:00 PM HI, there, just rereading this one and noticing how clever the title is. Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 8/14/2011 7:25:00 PM Almost anything increases size so I'm verry careful. Enjoyed your fun verse that pokes fun at the tummy. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/8/2011 1:34:00 PM grin...now now the poem should stand alone without the photo, yes? Light & Love [trying to find that couplet you wanted me to check you didn't remind me the name?] Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/1/2011 7:29:00 PM Joe, just stopping by to say hi and thanks for your fun comments to me today! Enjoy your weekend. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/5/2011 8:22:00 AM a winner for me, joe!! wow..:) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/4/2011 2:03:00 PM Great write, Joe. Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 6/4/2011 8:33:00 AM read this again, really liked it. thank you for commenting on Breezes on the lake. Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 6/4/2011 12:58:00 AM Ah well i failed to catch a fish, with the little shiela dish, but thems the breaks old mate of mates, great verse here my thought dictates, Too much of the yellow belly, codfish might be great, on telly? My Gramps tried to run down a scab shearer, in Bourke, but Grannie Tuppy saved his life by reefing on the wheel...(a future verse?) on ya Joe Don Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 6/2/2011 4:11:00 PM Sounds like an octopus eating a squid....hehe! I have my son home now and we are going on a trip so I may not be around so much over the next two months. I will check in some though. Miss you all!! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/2/2011 3:04:00 PM Reads like a winner to me..Very creative..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 5/31/2011 9:31:00 PM Hi Joe! Especially liked your cool title for this-- way to go for this mouthful of a write :) Wish you the best in the contest :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/31/2011 8:55:00 PM Hi, Joe, just rereading this COOL poem. Nice seeing you on here today! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/31/2011 5:01:00 PM wow a very shivery verse! liked the half rhyme too! Light & Love Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/31/2011 6:55:00 AM excellent Joe.. good luck in the contest luv.. great take on the theme.. this is why I like my feet on sandy beach..haha.. Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 5/29/2011 4:18:00 PM watch out for the tender hook, yes you, you feathered chook a hunter enterprising... n watch out for the bidgee:) thanks Joe mate and johnson ate:) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/26/2011 10:22:00 AM good one Joe,,, i saw the pic... and this is an aweoms job.... good luck to you my poet friend,..p.d. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/26/2011 7:19:00 AM Joe, hello! its nice to find all my poet friends still here. A wonderful entry for any feast~luv*SKAT Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 5/25/2011 5:39:00 PM great piece of creative poetry good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 5/25/2011 3:23:00 PM Hi Joe. Thanks for reading the piece about Irish in the UK. have little time as I have a 1 man show that I am writing to preform for 3 nights in July, all about the tall ships. The best of luck in the contest with this fine piece. Cheers, Eamon Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 5/24/2011 5:52:00 PM really like that title, Joe...a tongue tripper. well executed poem for that cool pic in Carolyn's contest. Good luck to you... About spirits smelling bad ....nah ...they're probably just heaven scent. (sorry ..couldn't help myself) Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 5/24/2011 10:01:00 AM Interesting write, Joe! Might be about a bird...but not a penguin. >(* ) Great imagery...I'm still trying to figure this one out! Good luck in the contest, Joe!! Mikki Login to Reply

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