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Attack Alas Alack of Snack

Fishy and Medusa like moves subtle in piscean flight Slower than darting eyes small mammals increase your size Shady (steak out) waiting cold smooth incalculable expectant satiating For Carolyn Devonshire's attack contest!!

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Daver Austin

Date: 11/11/2012 10:52:00 AM

This goes very well with a fifth of Old Sunnybrook or some vintage wine. Love, daver

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/8/2012 3:28:00 PM

Oh, I think I might understand this now, Joe? About a person under the sign of Pisces?? Does no sound like a kind soul.:( He had certainly feasted on the guts of others. Oh well, bad him! Best wishes, Love, Mikki

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2012 4:54:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2011 12:27:00 AM

JOE, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! VERY INTERESTING...Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2011 11:54:00 PM

HI, there, just rereading this one and noticing how clever the title is.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/14/2011 7:25:00 PM

Almost anything increases size so I'm verry careful. Enjoyed your fun verse that pokes fun at the tummy.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/8/2011 1:34:00 PM

grin...now now the poem should stand alone without the photo, yes? Light & Love [trying to find that couplet you wanted me to check you didn't remind me the name?]

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2011 7:29:00 PM

Joe, just stopping by to say hi and thanks for your fun comments to me today! Enjoy your weekend. LUv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2011 8:22:00 AM

a winner for me, joe!! wow..:) huggs, nette

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2011 2:03:00 PM

Great write, Joe.

James Foulk

Date: 6/4/2011 8:33:00 AM

read this again, really liked it. thank you for commenting on Breezes on the lake.

Don Johnson

Date: 6/4/2011 12:58:00 AM

Ah well i failed to catch a fish, with the little shiela dish, but thems the breaks old mate of mates, great verse here my thought dictates, Too much of the yellow belly, codfish might be great, on telly? My Gramps tried to run down a scab shearer, in Bourke, but Grannie Tuppy saved his life by reefing on the wheel...(a future verse?) on ya Joe Don

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/2/2011 4:11:00 PM

Sounds like an octopus eating a squid....hehe! I have my son home now and we are going on a trip so I may not be around so much over the next two months. I will check in some though. Miss you all!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2011 3:04:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Very creative..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/31/2011 9:31:00 PM

Hi Joe! Especially liked your cool title for this-- way to go for this mouthful of a write :) Wish you the best in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2011 8:55:00 PM

Hi, Joe, just rereading this COOL poem. Nice seeing you on here today!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/31/2011 5:01:00 PM

wow a very shivery verse! liked the half rhyme too! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2011 6:55:00 AM

excellent Joe.. good luck in the contest luv.. great take on the theme.. this is why I like my feet on sandy beach..haha..

Don Johnson

Date: 5/29/2011 4:18:00 PM

watch out for the tender hook, yes you, you feathered chook a hunter enterprising... n watch out for the bidgee:) thanks Joe mate and johnson ate:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2011 10:22:00 AM

good one Joe,,, i saw the pic... and this is an aweoms job.... good luck to you my poet friend,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2011 7:19:00 AM

Joe, hello! its nice to find all my poet friends still here. A wonderful entry for any feast~luv*SKAT

James Foulk

Date: 5/25/2011 5:39:00 PM

great piece of creative poetry good luck in the contest.

Eamon Duffin

Date: 5/25/2011 3:23:00 PM

Hi Joe. Thanks for reading the piece about Irish in the UK. have little time as I have a 1 man show that I am writing to preform for 3 nights in July, all about the tall ships. The best of luck in the contest with this fine piece. Cheers, Eamon

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/24/2011 5:52:00 PM

really like that title, Joe...a tongue tripper. well executed poem for that cool pic in Carolyn's contest. Good luck to you... About spirits smelling bad ....nah ...they're probably just heaven scent. (sorry ..couldn't help myself)

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/24/2011 10:01:00 AM

Interesting write, Joe! Might be about a bird...but not a penguin. >(* ) Great imagery...I'm still trying to figure this one out! Good luck in the contest, Joe!! Mikki