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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/3/2010 1:25:00 PM
This non-traditional haiku is one to make ya think! Very wonderful, nicely done. Just a note: incase you did not know in the traditional haiku: there are no punctuations, no big case or/ capital lettering and the title is thee first or/ the first two words of the poem. :) a modern haiku from my understanding can use the first three words for the title. Good luck with your writing!!!!! Lukky Lu a.k.a. Cindy or Lucinda ~ smile, have a blessed day Sara
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Date: 9/2/2010 12:35:00 PM
Very subtle, the paradox makes me think and pull me into a rich depth beneath the brevity. Right on
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Date: 8/30/2010 10:15:00 PM
free and yet attached. Very interesting little write, Sara!!
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:56:00 PM
A very unique haiku, Sara. Good luck in the contest. seems to be a winner
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:23:00 PM
Great Haiku...and I'm pleased to say that ! This is an Haiku ! Awesome dear poet ! james
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Date: 8/30/2010 3:48:00 PM
Wow I luv this piece Sara.. good luck if for the contest... Haiku's are so expressive and yours is impressive ... my wedding photos are now posted... system only allows ten .. and we have so so many more..luv enjoy..
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Date: 8/30/2010 11:19:00 AM
hey, enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 8/30/2010 10:50:00 AM
Our stems can be weak sometimes, Sara. Thought-provoking haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/30/2010 9:45:00 AM
nice one, good luck in the contest
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