Atrocious!
An eye for an eye and the whole world goes blind
They become thy home, a home that thou can't even find
Seems like seamless love, that doesn't involve mind
Staring without eyes, faceless yet wild
A little too longer to remain what's best to pretend
A little too close to what's going to happen in the end
A little too late to comprehend
A little too late to condescend
Worse the part when it comes to render
Worst it becomes, when dived into,
transcribing the vocabulary not meant to be rendered
Atrocious it is, as surrendered
Bled on paper as thou bled in time
Scarce is translucence
Abundant became reticence
Those words, coy! result of which was no rhyme
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