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Atmospheric Pressure

Down by the sea amid the frolic and glee If the sky's blue, you're feeling the breeze Adore, savor, relish; hear the wind's sigh Because the atmospheric pressure's high. On your farm, and all around the town Calm air, no storms, no need to frown Dance, bounce, spin, twiddle, twirl in joy Because the atmospheric pressure's high. Up in the clouds, near mountain tops Heart's feeling fog as oxygen drops Clouds will glow, storms will blow Because the atmospheric pressure's low. In high altitudes where the airplanes fly Lower temperatures will roam the sky In airplane's cabin the air's full of woe Because the atmospheric pressure's low. High or low pressure, stormy or a blue sky Rest easy knowing laws of nature apply Sun will shine after the rains are gone A weary night will bring a cheery dawn. Placed 3rd August 10, 2017 Atmospheric Pressure--Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton Placed 3rd: Strand select U poetry contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 2/2/2024 7:29:00 AM
Very nicely penned Vijay, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 9/30/2022 6:04:00 AM
Hi Vijay, so beautiful a poem. I had posted one comment a little earlier. I accidentally deleted it. Sorry. Your concluding lines ring with robust positivity. It is like a crown to your beautiful poem so wonderfully rhyming and mesmerizing......
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Date: 2/20/2020 3:20:00 AM
Vijay congrats my friend on your win!;)
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Date: 11/2/2018 2:40:00 PM
I am back at this one, unable to find one to comment to. Can you think of your best personal favorite poem for me to see or review again? I would love to know what you consider YOUR best, Vijay and thanks for visiting me recently. I am so short on time lately and really appreciate your comments.
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Date: 10/7/2018 6:18:00 PM
I'm glad to have finally seen this one and I did not have to search hard . I just went to a back poem and found it on my first click. I see it garnered a placement and it was well deserved, Vijay. A very belated congrats in Shadow's contest from last year.
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Date: 11/28/2017 9:38:00 AM
Delightful poem, Vijay. I love poems w/scientific themes and words. The uplifting message in the last stanza is so refreshing and invigorating, much like feeling the barometer rise from the atmospheric pressure. Excellent poem. Love and joy always.
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Date: 9/5/2017 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, so well written, :))
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Roy for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/4/2017 11:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Subimal!
Date: 9/4/2017 7:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Vijay! Great work!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2017 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Anita!
Date: 9/4/2017 4:57:00 PM
Your poem is completely awesome Vijay! I can't believe I had missed this... till now. An amazing and entertaining read excellently and poetically told in a smooth flow with your wonderful rhythm and rhyme . Congratulations on your win Vijay! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/4/2017 5:13:00 PM
I am always so happy to read your lovely feedback. Thank you Susan!
Date: 8/15/2017 7:43:00 AM
This is such a nice easy to read poem. Love the journey.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2017 8:43:00 AM
Very pleased by your visit Lewis--love your feedback.
Date: 8/13/2017 1:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this nice write ... Thank you for liking my haiku crescent shadow ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/13/2017 7:14:00 AM
So, happy to have your feedback Probir--you write so well!
Date: 8/11/2017 7:46:00 AM
Enjoyable writing/ cheerful rhyme/ if you had not joined/ It would have been a crime! Welcome my dear new friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2017 10:24:00 AM
You are a poet of poets. Enjoyed your post. Thanks Demetrios.
Date: 8/10/2017 4:40:00 PM
Love this, Vijay! This was not an easy contest for me! GL on your fabulous write!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2017 10:28:00 AM
I agree Kim.. real hard to weave science in art. Delighted by your feedback.
Date: 8/10/2017 4:38:00 PM
This write is surely awesome! Such a lovely poem here Vijay! I enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this afternoon, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2017 10:26:00 AM
So happy to have your wonderful comments Russell.
Date: 8/10/2017 3:17:00 PM
i like the lively atmosphere whirling on and igniting the spirit... greeat job, vijay..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2017 4:28:00 PM
So happy to have your comments Nette--thank you.
Date: 8/10/2017 3:02:00 PM
- I enjoy this beautiful poem, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest - Agree with Tim regarding the repeated line, well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2017 4:27:00 PM
Delighted by your feedback Sunshine--thank you.
Date: 8/10/2017 12:09:00 PM
I enjoyed the repeated lines and the final stanza brought it together. Best of luck
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2017 2:49:00 PM
Love you feedback Tim. Many thanks.
Date: 8/10/2017 10:34:00 AM
This reads so smoothly. A very fun poem and so well written Vijay! I love it :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Heidi--felt a bit constrained by the subject matter.

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