Atmospheric Pressure

Down by the sea amid the frolic and glee
If the sky's blue, you're feeling the breeze
Adore, savor, relish; hear the wind's sigh
Because the atmospheric pressure's high.

On your farm, and all around the town
Calm air, no storms, no need to frown
Dance, bounce, spin, twiddle, twirl in joy 
Because the atmospheric pressure's high.

Up in the clouds, near mountain tops
Heart's feeling fog as oxygen drops
Clouds will glow, storms will blow
Because the atmospheric pressure's low.

In high altitudes where the airplanes fly
Lower temperatures will roam the sky
In airplane's cabin the air's full of woe 
Because the atmospheric pressure's low.

High or low pressure, stormy or a blue sky
Rest easy knowing laws of nature apply
Sun will shine after the rains are gone
A weary night will bring a cheery dawn.

Placed 3rd
August 10, 2017
Atmospheric Pressure--Sponsored by Shadow Hamilton
Placed 3rd: Strand select U poetry contest by Brian Strand
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May Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Very nicely penned Vijay, I enjoyed the read
George Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Hi Vijay, so beautiful a poem. I had posted one comment a little earlier. I accidentally deleted it. Sorry. Your concluding lines ring with robust positivity. It is like a crown to your beautiful poem so wonderfully rhyming and mesmerizing......
Chiri Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 3:20 AM
Vijay congrats my friend on your win!;)
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 2:40 PM
I am back at this one, unable to find one to comment to. Can you think of your best personal favorite poem for me to see or review again? I would love to know what you consider YOUR best, Vijay and thanks for visiting me recently. I am so short on time lately and really appreciate your comments.
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 6:18 PM
I'm glad to have finally seen this one and I did not have to search hard . I just went to a back poem and found it on my first click. I see it garnered a placement and it was well deserved, Vijay. A very belated congrats in Shadow's contest from last year.
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November 28, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Delightful poem, Vijay. I love poems w/scientific themes and words. The uplifting message in the last stanza is so refreshing and invigorating, much like feeling the barometer rise from the atmospheric pressure. Excellent poem. Love and joy always.
Pett Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, so well written, :))
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Thanks Roy for your lovely comments!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 11:21 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thanks Subimal!
Harris Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 7:11 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Vijay! Great work!
Pandit Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 7:58 PM
Thank you Anita!
Ashley Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 4:57 PM
Your poem is completely awesome Vijay! I can't believe I had missed this... till now. An amazing and entertaining read excellently and poetically told in a smooth flow with your wonderful rhythm and rhyme . Congratulations on your win Vijay! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 5:13 PM
I am always so happy to read your lovely feedback. Thank you Susan!
Raynes Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 7:43 AM
This is such a nice easy to read poem. Love the journey.
Pandit Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Very pleased by your visit Lewis--love your feedback.
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 1:16 AM
Enjoyed reading this nice write ... Thank you for liking my haiku crescent shadow ...
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 7:14 AM
So, happy to have your feedback Probir--you write so well!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Enjoyable writing/ cheerful rhyme/ if you had not joined/ It would have been a crime! Welcome my dear new friend, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 10:24 AM
You are a poet of poets. Enjoyed your post. Thanks Demetrios.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Love this, Vijay! This was not an easy contest for me! GL on your fabulous write!
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 10:28 AM
I agree Kim.. real hard to weave science in art. Delighted by your feedback.
Sivey Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 4:38 PM
This write is surely awesome! Such a lovely poem here Vijay! I enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this afternoon, Great Work!!
Pandit Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 10:26 AM
So happy to have your wonderful comments Russell.
Onclaud Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 3:17 PM
i like the lively atmosphere whirling on and igniting the spirit... greeat job, vijay..huggs
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 4:28 PM
So happy to have your comments Nette--thank you.
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 3:02 PM
- I enjoy this beautiful poem, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest - Agree with Tim regarding the repeated line, well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Delighted by your feedback Sunshine--thank you.
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 12:09 PM
I enjoyed the repeated lines and the final stanza brought it together. Best of luck
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 2:49 PM
Love you feedback Tim. Many thanks.
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 10:34 AM
This reads so smoothly. A very fun poem and so well written Vijay! I love it :)
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Thanks Heidi--felt a bit constrained by the subject matter.
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