William Kelii Kekaula Poet Suzette Prime

Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Suzette Prime

Inspired: 2023 December 05

 

*1st Place*
Any theme Any form
Contest Judged: 2023 December 07
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

 

Image: N/A

Atmospheric Perspective

I painted a purple sky
Looked at it
I thought it looked brown
Like the ground
So I painted trees on it
And a stream
The stream overflowed
And the trees floated away
In a purple sky

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Paula Goldsmith December 7, 2023 at 8:00 PM Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write in a few lines. Love It... Have a wonderful day with your win............... William Kelii Kekaula December 7, 2023 at 8:05 PM Thank you so much, Paula. Blessings to you always, my friend. Aloha, William

Silent One December 7, 2023 at 1:43 PM Great imagery in this one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. William Kelii Kekaula December 7, 2023 at 3:21 PM Yea, another shot in the dark--thanks, Silent One. Aloha, William

Sotto Poet December 7, 2023 at 9:14 AM Congratulations on your 1st place contest win, with this thought-provoking atmosphere perspective poem. William Kelii Kekaula December 7, 2023 at 10:19 AM Thank you, Lasaad, on this positive note. Aloha, William