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Atmospheric Inferno

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Boisterous clouds are churning, roiling air-mass in warm updraft Declaring on callous inhabitants of earth, a dark ferocious war Manifesting malevolent force, imposing anger on spatial norms, Conspiring with anguished winds to invigorate violent storms. Colossal is their expanse that threatens the rise of new dawn Offering a preview of what face of death would encompass When enraged nature punishes humans for irresponsible acts: Burning dirty fossil fuels, and decapitating vast forest lands. Atmospheric inferno defies galactic harmony of equilibrium Suppressing sun’s orange glow striving to uplift amber horizon, Shrouding advent of nascent day to teach humanity a lesson Collaborating with mighty oceans, stirring hurricanes and cyclones. Overshadowed by the reckless commotion of ghastly gray, Emerging marigold expression of ascendant tangerine daybreak Grieves for the lost vegetation and deserted parched terrains, Thundering a warning to foretell why the birds have already left. March 28, 2020 Placed 1st: Gif #2 contest by William Kekaula

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/26/2020 10:57:00 AM

A vivid portrait of nature, Vijay. Another great write! :)

John Hamilton

Date: 4/27/2020 3:25:00 PM

Well said Vijay, I can see why this ones a winner, captivating words on full display. So full of meaning and a dire warning!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/7/2020 9:08:00 AM

Much appreciate John--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/5/2020 11:45:00 AM

Vijay my friend what a sensational write - the last two lines of this sad but breathtaking poem describe your 'Atmospheric Inferno'perfectly - congrats dear Vijay. Blessngs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/5/2020 4:32:00 PM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/1/2020 10:28:00 PM

Yes does seem nature is fighting back...lets hope the human race take heed....Brilliant poetry Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2020 6:18:00 AM

Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Joseph May

Date: 4/1/2020 6:40:00 PM

Nature brews up a fierce storm, Very nicely penned Vijay, GL in the contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2020 6:18:00 AM

Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Hilo Poet

Date: 4/1/2020 4:32:00 PM

I enjoyed reading the straightforwardness of your piece, Vijay, your use of metaphors is nothing short of amazing, worthy for 1st place, my grateful thanks for your participation, Aloha William

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2020 6:17:00 AM

Thank you for holding contests, William--much appreciate your kind remarks..many thanks.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/1/2020 4:22:00 PM

Wow, this is all kinds of fantastic, Vijay:-) Heartiest congratulations on first place win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2020 6:16:00 AM

Much appreciate Edward--many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2020 3:14:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, Vijay! When nature loses her composure because we abuse her hospitality, she soon reminds us that we are not as powerful as we think. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/1/2020 3:58:00 PM

Yes indeed--nature has the power. Many thanks Paul--much appreciate. Regards.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/1/2020 12:41:00 PM

Very scary warning Vijay, well done...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/1/2020 3:57:00 PM

Thank you Charlie--much appreciate.

P.M. Richter

Date: 4/1/2020 11:13:00 AM

Beautiful wisdom my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/1/2020 3:57:00 PM

Thank you PM--much appreciate.

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/30/2020 6:22:00 AM

Wow...its frightening...seems everything is changing...when birds leave what comes...You made your point clearly...I hope we get back on track before we destroy everything

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2020 8:58:00 AM

Thank you for the kind feedback, Arturo--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/30/2020 2:22:00 AM

This is incredible Vijay! A war without a face of the enemy that lurks undetected until it destroys. Keep safe my friend. xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2020 8:57:00 AM

Much appreciate Connie--many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/29/2020 2:42:00 PM

Wow. Powerful poem Vijay. Your writing is superb :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2020 8:57:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate the kind remarks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/29/2020 8:00:00 AM

Thought-provoking piece, Vijay--a cautionary, very poetic and descriptive commentary on mankind's failure to take care of Earth. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/29/2020 2:02:00 PM

Much appreciate Janice--many many thanks.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 3/29/2020 4:48:00 AM

Seems like your imagination erupted when the gif continuously rewinded.. Wonderfully crafted lines.. Good luck in the contest Vijay...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/29/2020 6:20:00 AM

Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/28/2020 10:21:00 PM

this war that is raging is so scary with the invisible enemy lurking, never knowing where it is, who it will hit next... scary times my friend... well crafted write my friend! hugs and blessings!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/29/2020 6:19:00 AM

Much appreciate Sandy--many thanks my friend.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/28/2020 9:22:00 PM

"nature punishes humans for irresponsible acts" God is in control. The seasons were set in motion and that will never change. The weather is beyond our control. The things we do here- to our World, on purpose. Ways to destroy it. Yes, we are in control. So- We are reaping those actions. Sad indeed. Many blessings to you my dear friend. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/29/2020 6:18:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate, as always, Brandy.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/28/2020 11:07:00 AM

Absolutely! We are seeing "the face of death" hearing "the thunder of warning".. we are feeling "the conspiracy of Nature forces" and living their rage! We are all going through the inferno of contagion and feeling its dread! But not all of us have the gift and artistry to interpret the Humanity threat and universe chaos in such an astounding creativity! So wonderful a poetry, dear Vijay! Definitely worthy of being faved and honoured! Stay safe. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2020 11:45:00 AM

Always a pleasure to read your comments my friend. Delighted by your kind feedback--many thanks, Besma. Regards!

Silent One

Date: 3/28/2020 9:13:00 AM

You are right.. a poem full of truths that most are aware yet some still ignore.... The birds may never return..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2020 11:43:00 AM

The birds are warning in advance. Much appreciate, SO--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/28/2020 9:01:00 AM

Well written Vijay, mankind is reaping the rewards of his recklessness and we are all having to pay for it. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2020 11:42:00 AM

Yes indeed--things don't look good. Much appreciate, Tom--many many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/28/2020 8:20:00 AM

It seems my friend, Vijay we both drink from the same source of inspiration! You have written an inspiring poem here my friend: Powerful, beautiful and divine! Excellently done! Blessings

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2020 11:40:00 AM

Your inspiration is beyond compare my friend. I do appreciate reading your kind remarks--many many thanks.