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Atlantis: a Click Away

Quick snap of my heels and through a time warp I fell To a place that Plato had written about so well In a lost continent I emerged safe and sound Gilded architecture and pyramids did surround Now having traveled back more than ten thousand years My request was granted as my eyes filled with tears. For I knew the grandeur of Atlantis would fall Succumbing in the last Ice Age to a sea wall Bronze-skinned natives were working, scurrying about And of what was to come, they were clueless, no doubt A society comprised of rulers and slaves Would soon find their homes beneath the Atlantic waves There were ships in a harbor about to set out Each vessel was headed for a different route Some soon embarked for the nearby African shore But many sailed west on a great quest to explore I knew a new continent awaited brave men These ancestors of the Native American I tried to make contact with thousands left on shore Knowing mountains on their land would be the Azores Few would survive as the Polar Cap melted down Their villages would become undersea ghost towns Although I saw them clearly, they didn’t see me I could not warn them of what they couldn’t foresee Another click of my heels and I soared to the skies The only witness to Atlantis’s demise Their technology now scatted throughout the Earth In Egypt, the Americas, it found rebirth Its very existence, debated many years For it had left behind just a few souvenirs The Bimini Road and underwater cities Fuel interests of historical committees *Entry for Michael Falotico’s “Close your eyes and click your heels” contest By Carolyn Devonshire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/1/2011 10:17:00 PM
Absolutely great, Lee
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Date: 8/29/2011 9:39:00 AM
This is simply excellent Carolyn, Well done and a great job of reporting on your imagination and what little theories may be known. Beautiful incorporationCI enjoyed it. This could have very well been in the flying contest too or any one for that matter. Congratulations to you on hitting my favs again.
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:18:00 AM
Wow, I'd love to see this too. I'm sure they will discover it some day and prove its existence once and for all
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Date: 8/27/2011 5:42:00 AM
a wonderful write on Atlants Carolyn.Best wishes for the contest .
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Date: 8/27/2011 12:18:00 AM
Carolyn So when the greatest of the mammoths drowned, the waters rose over the old home town, and Noah's Ark it wallowed forth, a sea of mud Atlantic ocean brought, Great Tuaoi stone went under, Devils triangle still works it's wonders, perhaps for really naught? the Alantean Gesunder...
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Date: 8/26/2011 7:14:00 PM
Love your theme and approach with this well informative and historical write dipped inside of poetic fantasy! You've certainly earned your degree in poetry!
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:03:00 AM
Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Carolyn. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:56:00 AM
I haven't been to Atlantis for many years. Thanks for the trip. Tony
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:33:00 PM
Awesome! This is a wonderful write!! I too would like to have been able to see Atlantis in all its glory! Great job!!
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:19:00 PM
Very expressive and creative write lovely Lady Carolyn...with love....old Jack
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