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A collaboration with Linda (Poet Destroyer) Atlantis Can't be re-written by the Gods The land and sands of time Destroyed by the fire of Poseidon's curse Atlantis swallowed by: Earth In one day and one night Peaceful existence met its end Built on a volcano, now surrounded by ancient rippled tears Lava stripped apart the rich and glorious empire Enriched by engineers and architects whom loved power more than the Gods Forgotten souls, sheltered by a watery grave History withheld from shallow sunken memories Western sky's hide the truth, a vision from the Pillars of Hercules "An island situated in front of the Strait of Gibraltar" Ghostly ruins wait to rise above the Mediterranean and Atlantic waves A magical land held down by the hands of death, Atlantis lost city walls...a secret hidden by mermaids Partially buried, beneath the ocean floor it lies The largest sunken treasure never to be found Magnificent pillars of an imperial palace still stand Somewhere hidden under ancient sand Some are leaning against turrets, that toppled after the impact Nothing human will ever inhabit these walls No feet will ever touch these staircases, again Only an eerie silence now resides here, with the blue-green waters Seaweed grows along it's outer walls, like ivy on a trellis. Obscuring it even further from the human eye. Other ocean tides will never compare Tantalizing blend of fantasy and mystery Stone walls covered with precious gems ...Listen to Plato's voice... "Look close, look close, into the sea!" Through the light and Pillars of Hercules Some where out there buried in the vast Atlantis the Paradise --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Linda, I just wanted to say thank you for allowing me to write this awesome poem with you. I truly appreciate all of the support that you have given me since I have been here. It is sad to see such a talented poet leaving the Soup. You are one of my favorites, and I will miss you very, very much, Linda. Always & Forever, Kelly

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Date: 5/26/2015 6:11:00 PM
Kelly, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/14/2014 6:04:00 PM
Kelly, you and Linda did an awesome job on this poem about Atlantis. It's a place worth dreaming about.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/15/2014 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sheri! I'm so happy that you enjoyed our collaboration. It really was great fun writing this poem with Linda! :)
Date: 1/17/2014 11:21:00 PM
Reminds me of the George Pal production of 1961 titled "Atlantis, the Lost Continent", and Donovan's 1969 hit song "Atlantis". This is descriptive writing.
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Date: 1/16/2014 5:10:00 PM
amazing beautiful piece loved the vision in it excellently crafted
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Date: 1/15/2014 3:01:00 PM
Amazing collaboration!! Every word was captivating. Great job to both of you! Always, Laura
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Date: 1/12/2014 4:54:00 AM
Kelly fantastic poem congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/11/2014 5:11:00 PM
I saw your name on the list..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/11/2014 1:29:00 PM
I like your ancient sensitivity kelly. It is wonderful and encouraging to have history, passion and poetry entwined so intelligently. 'Loved power more than the Gods...' We written J.A.B.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/13/2014 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Justin! I have to give a lot of the credit to Linda, for adding the history part into our poem. She is just amazing! I am glad that you enjoyed our poem, and I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/11/2014 9:18:00 AM
This are good words to PD and congratulations for the lovely win
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/13/2014 2:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Litan! I am glad that you enjoyed our poem. I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/11/2014 1:53:00 AM
Hi Kelly, Congratulations:) --- Thank you for supporting the last contest I will host for the time being. Take Care, and enjoy the fun blog, I posted honoring all winning poems.... Blog Called "Unicorn__" ---> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?PoetID=18720&BlogID=18529 Take Care, <3 Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/11/2014 5:08:00 PM
You're very welcome, Linda. Thank you so much for the honor! You deserve some recognition, too, since you wrote half of this poem! So, congrats to you, as well, PD! Take care, until we meet again :)
Date: 1/11/2014 12:53:00 AM
Enjoyed the write and congratulations on the win, Kelly
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:50:00 PM
I will miss you Kelly, someday in the future I wish to write another poem with you. I will miss everyone and they know it. I am rolling up my sleeves. I got one contest to go. Plus the one I put out today for fun.... Everyone is a winner in my heart. I became a fan and follower the more I read your poems. Sorry, my depression kept getting in the way. Take care, and keep up the good poems, and wins.. LINDA
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/7/2014 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I hope that we can collaborate once again. Sorry that I missed your last contest, but I wasn't feeling well enough to be here. I always looked forward to entering your contests, and I always felt honored no matter where I placed! Thank you so much for the fav, this poem is one of my favs, too! Take care, PD :)
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:50:00 PM
ps... This is a fav... of course :) xox~ Linda
Date: 1/7/2014 5:09:00 PM
I know that many of you have already read this poem when Linda posted it back in November. Yet, for some reason I never posted it on my page. And, I would like to do so, now....We are all going to miss you being here, Linda!
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