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The Earth's Oceans Poetry Contest

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Atlantic Ocean

Robert Wylan. “The ocean stirs the heart, inspires the imagination and brings eternal joy to the soul.”

Shallow in many beaches, deep in other seas.
Vast in most places, shallow in others.
     Seasons come, seasons go, that's life.
   Tempests are common in the north or south.
Ships are built, mostly sturdy, mostly strong.
        Tempests do not spare all, for some are sunk.

I dare to cross the Atlantic on a cruise ship.
   Not the Titanic type, I'm sure.
     There's fine luxury everywhere,
And no doubt, all prefer summer crossing.
     Mind you, occasionally a tempest erupts.
Summer is lenient, and crossing is pleasant.

Shallow in many beaches, deep in others
Crowds huddle on the deck to watch,
     People admire the sleek dolphins.
     What a great sight to see them jump in unison,
Only to disappear in the vast seas afar.
By far the biggest sight would be
     To spy a giant whale afar.
But no one liked to watch the deadly sharks.
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Godwin Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 5:27 PM
I enjoyed reading you Atlantic poem very much and hope it placed, it is worthy. I don't enjoy still feeling something is 'off' between us??? Always good to find new poems by you, Victor. Hugs, CayCay
Rolland Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 12:53 AM
wonderful poetry, now i need to cross the Atlantic, have a nice sunday
May Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 6:33 AM
A fun cruise with lovely sights, Nicely done
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 12:35 AM
Sounds so exhilarating, watching the dolphins is a joy, we loved seeing them offshore in the Pacific Ocean. I am terrified of sharks. My daughter and son went out on the Pacific a few years ago and I was worried as sharks were seen in the area they went. I do not like sharks at all :/ I do love your poem, it was vivid and exciting!
George Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 12:17 AM
A cruise is so exciting most of the time. Sitting on the deck and watching the ocean where dolphins gambol and whales appear and disappear is a wonderful experience. Beautifully written, dear Victor.
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 8:38 PM
This is a very enjoyable poem you wrote about the great Atlantic
Hind Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 3:46 PM
A nice tribute to the Atlantic. Good luck!!
Gifford Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Hello Victor, a wonderful piece , so true no one likes to watch the deadly sharks. Good luck with the contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 7:32 AM
WOW!!! Your "Atlantic Ocean" is a wonderful write/story. I love the quote. Great/Pretty Picture... Great/Fun Ending...  Oh yes, we would to see the dolphins and giant whale but no deadly sharks. "Good Luck" I also did, Atlantic Ocean. Have a lovely day writing away..........
Roper Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 7:08 AM
I like the way you wrote for this contest more of a sight of riding a boat. Good luck
Kendrick Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Good one. Informative and entertaining. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Reads like a good contender to me.. Way to go. Sara K..I did work on mine a little more. I don't know if it got in because only one opening was left and sometimes someone else gets theirs in first before it closes. Sara K
Poet Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Fantastic and clear theme that intertwines nature's depth and human endeavor, balancing imagery between the sea and human experiences. Well crafted, best for a win
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