Atishoo

At Christmas I contracted the flu
From taking the kids to the zoo
The hippos were a wheezing 
Ten monkeys were sneezing 
Now my temperature’s a hundred and two!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Collins Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:31 AM
More smiles for me today. Kathy
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January 14, 2012 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, Kathryn chez x
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January 9, 2012 at 10:22 PM
This is really cute. Congrats on your win.
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January 14, 2012 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Andrea chez x
Williams Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:23 AM
Cheryle congrats on your win..David
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January 9, 2012 at 7:30 AM
I've only just found the results page (still learning to navigate this site) an honorable mention no less, I'm pretty chuffed, thanks, David!
Brown Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Sneezing Limerick" contest Cheryle. Love, Carol
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January 9, 2012 at 7:16 AM
I won? wow, how cool! thanks guys, this is very sweet, it has made my morning! cheryle x
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January 9, 2012 at 6:50 AM
a very cute Limerick Cheryle. Well done.
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January 9, 2012 at 7:31 AM
thank you! cheryle x
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January 8, 2012 at 10:04 PM
Love it. Congratulations Cheryle
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January 14, 2012 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Bob chez x
Song Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 7:25 PM
Congrats to you, Cheryl! Please keep on posting! Gwendolen
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January 14, 2012 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Gwen chez x
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January 8, 2012 at 7:24 PM
Hi Cheryle..I have a pair of shoes JUST LIKE those!! My legs aren't that sexy tho!! ha ha. Anyways, I have to share with you that I judged the first 2 rounds and then off to the ice cream parlor this evening for the final round..Your poem had a tender place in my corner bc I love children's poetry more than the other judges..I can see this story being carried out also. You drag the kids to the zoo being the devoted mom and then u suffer with sickness..It was all worth it tho just to see their smiles. Congrat on this HM.
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January 9, 2012 at 7:32 AM
thank you, Gwen! muwha! cheryle x
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January 8, 2012 at 7:09 PM
Congrats Cheryle on your win.
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January 14, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Kash chez x
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January 6, 2012 at 1:02 PM
The monkey to???- smiling :) (+me to) OXOX love Anne-Lise
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January 14, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Anne chez x
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January 3, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Very good!
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January 14, 2012 at 7:43 AM
Thank you, Chris chez x
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