Athena

You sleep ashore with longing eyes wide,
Consciously still to swell with the tide.
Late night before the endless, black sea,
I found you wavering there for me.

But lost you against the sky above,
And woke up mournfully in love.

Sunrise I found you in the garden, streaming,
With flowers in your hair, sprawled out and beaming.
You were warm like skin in summer rain;
We kicked across the fields you reign.

You seized my hand; my head still spins,
My love, you teem to merely exist,
And conquer means to infinite ends.

I take you in like roots take up rain,
Like a needle pricks an untapped vein,
Like a candle strips a savage flame. 

You are the absolute ecstasy for which I distend,
The sun to which I tirelessly bend.

And I lust so much it burns me up;   
When you see that dreams are not enough,
In a garden alluring, obscure, and lush—

The forbidden will awaken upon our touch.

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9/5/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/18/2015 4:19:00 AM
emotive lines come alive, Jessica.. big congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 1/18/2015 12:50:00 AM
Truly romantic,congrat Jessica...huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 12:50:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Jessica - great to read this again:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:23:00 AM
I loved this one the first time I read it and still I love it now. Congratulations on your well deserved win. I hope all is well with you.
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Date: 1/17/2015 4:31:00 AM
Nicely done poem, congrats on the win, Jessica
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Date: 10/17/2014 9:28:00 AM
Congrats to your sweet WIN Jessica! ^_^ <3
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Date: 10/15/2014 2:48:00 PM
Pick up line: "Hey, guess what...My poem about you has the most views out of my online collection."
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:45:00 PM
beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:38:00 PM
- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Jessica ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2014 8:22:00 AM
Again just a beautiful piece of writing. Congratulations on your honorable mention. It is well deserved.
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