Ataraxis

On a cool March morning...
With the sun shining dim behind the clouds...
A full-moon fades slowly 

As I look into the horizon... 
Starring at nothing- stuck on thought...
My mind begins to drift into at tranquil state of mind 

A cold breeze reddens my cheeks... 
As I stand in my moment of quietude
Sudden chills goose-bumps my flesh
 
Privately, I asked the lord... 
"Father, can you hear me... 
I cry each night to you... 

For the safety and good health of my loved ones" 
"Take my hand first- 'fore my loved ones 
I ask, the lord 

Suddenly, upon my cheeks, as the sun begins to shine bright... 
A warm wind breezes my nose ... 
Sending yet another trail of chills upon my flesh 

It was he whose heard me, for that I am sure 
In warmth, I close my eyes and thank our father... 
For hearing my cries- peace of mind settles in 


Pick a Title, Vol 14 Tristich Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh 
3/7/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/11/2020 10:56:00 AM
This is an excellent poem Charlie - peace, tranquility and serenity - what we should all seek - i Enjoyed your perspective in this contest - Ataraxis is a Greek word for not being anxious and keeping calm. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/7/2020 1:58:00 PM
The Reader of Hearts...knows yours... All it takes is a moment to spread your love...Nice PRAYER
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