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At What Moment

the sky sketches a tastefully delicious poem,
while a symphony of words touch separately

oh- the wait must be intense indeed

~ i know it is for me ~

so when did you comfortably decide,
the time was near,
for a rhyme to appear . .

please tell me-
at what moment
did your thoughts become one with mine?

___________



* because the connection can be that strong *

Copyright © Brandy Nicole | Year Posted 2018

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Joseph May Date: 10/15/2022 6:21:00 AM When thoughts of two meet blue skies in a sweet rhyme, Beautiful write Brandy, hugs Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/15/2022 7:48:00 PM It's such a beautiful moment indeed, when two collide in perfect harmony. Thank you, Joseph. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 2/1/2019 12:40:00 PM Perhaps this poem is about two poets separated by a wide expanse yet whose spirits have been brought together by the symphony of words they have shared... I am surprised you had only two comments on this poem. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 2/1/2019 8:05:00 PM Perhaps!!! This is one of my favorite poems. I like the when worlds collide, when moments become intense. If only through words. :) Two hearts lingering. Thank you John. I appreciate your kindness. It's okay, about the number on comments. I am still smiling. :) Brandy

Lyric Man Date: 7/1/2018 10:25:00 PM Hi Brandy, chemistry is so incredibly powerful. When two separate people with different personalities, skills, and taste find commonality in their soul.. well, it's electric! And that kind of rare intensity is truly.. worth the wait! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 7/1/2018 10:35:00 PM These are words from my heart, simply feeling such a moment, if it were to happen. The colliding of thoughts. Thank you Lyric Man for your wonderful comment. ~ Brandy