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At Vipassana Pagoda

I sat there in a quiet room eyes closed for a breath course a short time focused still calm peaceful thoughts slowing mindful of breath what a tranquil, serene moment it was
Date: 05/14/2021 Submitted for: Writing Prompt - Calm - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Note: 1) Vipassana Pagoda is a meditation dome hall serving as a monument of peace and harmony. 2) Vipassana is known to be the oldest Bhuddhist meditation practice.

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Date: 5/25/2021 4:17:00 AM
Ani, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your wonderful poem, love _Constance
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Date: 5/22/2021 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/17/2021 8:10:00 PM
Very nice, Anitha. I feel calmer reading your poem.
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Date: 5/17/2021 1:54:00 PM
Hey Ani, I totally enjoyed this piece. It felt like I was meditating too :) Great poem!
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Date: 5/15/2021 4:23:00 PM
I know how much your enjoy meditation and that is such an important feature of your religion. you drew on your life for a very fine writing on serenity. A wise choice for the form you chose.
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Date: 5/15/2021 6:57:00 AM
Really enjoyed your Zen moment here dear Anitha, :)
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Date: 5/15/2021 4:54:00 AM
Real Tranquility.
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Date: 5/14/2021 9:29:00 PM
Anitha. You've practiced well with each and every breath in Vipassana' poem. -Richard
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Date: 5/14/2021 5:35:00 PM
An exquisite write....short but powerful!! More to come dear Ani and keep safe always.
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Date: 5/14/2021 1:17:00 PM
Very elegant, Ani ~
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Date: 5/14/2021 9:01:00 AM
You are a blessing, Ani. A wonderful poem, short, sweet and with all the required words.
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