At The Swinging Of The Doors

Stuck in that corner of the woods, 
Where beauty bleeds n' the hearts are clay,
And hope is a distant mutant ray 
That fractures at the break of day.
You wake to find the same grey dust 
On every window pane,
And the weight of all the yesterdays 
Like rust upon the train tracks laid in vain.

You want leave, got plans for today,
But you're chained by every mistake.
Counting the cost of what it's gonna take...

At the swingin' of the doors,
Do you hear the future roarin'
Or just the silence it pours?
Is it freedom you are headin' for,
Or just a different set of wars?

At the swingin' of the doors
Keep goin'
Keep goin'
Keep goin'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Jones Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 1:27 PM
Ah a thought provoking one! I love the second verse the most! And the ending is kind of suspenseful. Great write Mo!
Mo Avatar
February 17, 2026 at 4:23 AM
Thanks!
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