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At the Restaurant

In a  warm restaurant interior
Lazing away, coffee in hand
A hot form sitting across, a platter of fruits 
My heart skipped a beat, as she lifted her fork, 
A berry making its way, unto her luscious mouth
Gentle a bite and the juice spill, I wish to devour
My chest searing hot, a sweet feel that caused
Approach her close, offered a wipe
She laughs in answer at my sight
In awe I find the reason for her mirth
a murky brown spot on white
My face blushed I retire, empty cup in hand
For the result of the scald on my chest was the cause.


© Nadiya (5 Feb 15)

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William Gray March 24, 2015 at 3:25 AM A great write as always Nadiya!. Best Wishes my friend!.

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2015 at 6:24 PM this was humorous and well told, Nadiya, using the male's perspective! Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 9:04 PM yes Andrea...Its from a males perspective... thank you for reading my poem and for your supportive words... nad!

David Fisher February 5, 2015 at 5:43 PM This is a funny story, with a great twist. Also, like the shape of the poem, Nadiya Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 9:02 PM Thank you David... pleased that you enjoyed it... nad!

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2015 at 4:17 PM Now, that's the way it goes...a wonderful, humorous story. Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 9:00 PM Thank you Kiser for your nice words on my poem.

Paul Callus February 5, 2015 at 12:41 PM You paint this scene with tact and humour, Nadiya! 5th and 6th lines are very seductive! Well done. // paul Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 2:11 PM Thank you Paul for reading my poem and for the nice words... take care, nad!

Eileen Manassian February 5, 2015 at 10:47 AM Good one, Nadiya. I didn't expect that outcome! Loved the way you described everything. Great write, my dear. Hugs Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 2:07 PM Thank you Eileen... a twist is always unexpected:)... Lov, nad!

Jan Allison February 5, 2015 at 10:10 AM Love the imagery and also find it a humourous write Nadiya:-) Hugs jan xx Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 2:05 PM Thank you for reading my pen Jan.. lov

Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2015 at 7:27 AM - Truly a wonderful written poem, dear Nadiya (#7 +) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 7:29 AM Thank you Anne-Lise for your nice words... love to read your pens... hugs!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 5, 2015 at 6:33 AM My chest searing hot, a sweet feel that caused... first time the scald is so cool. Well done Nad. Love. My fav. A 7+++ Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 6:41 AM :):) thank you Rajat... this scene can be repeatedly seen in movies... i thought of putting it in words and this is the result... take care... nad!