Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

At the Rehab Center

Squeeze a little tighter 
the therapist said at the rehab  
a tear drop fell at the corner 
of her eye 
as she smiled  



For Julia Ward’s Rehabilitation contest.
Written May 25th 2018.

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Line Gauthier June 1, 2018 at 10:09 PM Back with much deserved congrats, Pixie.

Brian Densham June 1, 2018 at 8:29 PM Simple and sincere. I like this very much. Congrats.

Susan Gentry May 31, 2018 at 8:01 PM Back to congratulate you on your win. This is so good. Well written. Used few words but oh so meaningful.

Richard Lamoureux May 31, 2018 at 4:19 PM Hi Pixie, I was pleased to see this one on the winners podium. Congrats!

Eve Roper May 31, 2018 at 4:06 PM Congratulations on a great win, Pixie, very heartfelt poem. hugs eve

John Lawless May 29, 2018 at 5:54 AM WOW what and open ended dagger to the heart....excellently composed and sharply piercing....

Ravi Sathasivam May 29, 2018 at 3:33 AM Excellent. Very well said. Thanks for sharing it

Muhammad Imtiaz May 28, 2018 at 3:09 AM very well said Pixie........

Winged Warrior May 27, 2018 at 7:22 AM Very well depicted in such few words Pix...a winner in my court...love and light...^WW^

Silent One May 26, 2018 at 12:31 PM You captured the moment deeply and very well poetically..

Richard Lamoureux May 26, 2018 at 8:23 AM A tender moment. Good luck in the contest.

Susan Gentry May 26, 2018 at 1:54 AM Oh that is good!! Can feel it...

Line Gauthier May 25, 2018 at 5:11 PM Wow - awesome poem of fabulous determination. Well penned, Pixie.

Mark Toney May 25, 2018 at 3:48 PM Brilliant, Pixie Dust :) Mystic Rose Rose May 25, 2018 at 3:57 PM I am glad you enjoyed the rehab poem, Mark,

Vijay Pandit May 25, 2018 at 2:04 PM I felt the pain as well..well crafted emotions in just a few words..hope you win BIG with this poem. Mystic Rose Rose May 25, 2018 at 3:57 PM It hard sometimes to find our bearing and our strength back, Glad we have rehab centers, they make all the difference, thanks for reading Vijay