--At the Perfect Wind Blown

last polar autumn
an open, scary air stands
at the perfect wind

this perfect autumn
casting lots fall October
seasonal breaking

trees wind now broken
summer ceases came and gone
perfect wind has blown



10/29/19
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2019©

analogyappreciationautumnwindhaiku

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Panagiota Romios

October 29, 2019 at 3:22 PM

Autumn is more than frightening in California. Both ends of the state burning. Northern, cA has lost 100,O00 Acres. Southern Ca is going to be horrid tonight. Your poem is lovely, I see my state on fire. I wrote a poem about Ca.... Who cares about reality? I don't see why reality and Poetry are anethema to one another..nor American poets ignoring the very states their poets live in. They will pray for a poet who is "ill"... But ignore a state on fire. Sad.. Panagiota.

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