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remember PARTIES?? *sigh*
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At the Party

A party scene, in 
Senryus - from last March, when a
party could happen.

He looked at me
like a treat. “You,” he said,
are looking hot girl!"

“I’m only hot in
in the dazzling reflection 
of your lust,” I said.

“Then you’re on 
FIRE,” he said as he put
his hands on my hips.

“Your girlfriend’s looking,”
I said, - she and I nodded.
His hands retracted.

He brushed his hair
back over his ears, "some
other time.” he said.

“He was set to jump
you,” My friend Kim teased, "No,
not really.” I shrugged.

"You disappointed?"
I snorted "yeah right,
His GF was watching."

"OH!," Kim realized,
"You were posing!! You're
STILL a virgin - I KNOW!!”

“SHUT UP!!” I laughed,
putting a hand to her lips,
“That’s secret info!”

“Sophomores are
ALWAYS virgins.” Kim said, “Not
Lisa, of course."

We turned, smiled,
and waved at Lisa - she
was dating three guys.

Kim says, “She could give
us both one.” "Leftovers," I
said, “should mean pizza.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gondolf Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Ah, yes, I remember parties...I wrote a poem about a party scene not long ago, "Forever in Delirium" more of an adult party but the thought is the same.
Vionet Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Too much corona danger for parties NOW... I must be cursed - but, of course, I'm not egocentric enough to think this whole mess was just to punish ME =] Just a happy... coincidence.
May Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 5:05 AM
It's been years and years since I was young dating sure has changed over time, I am glad I grew up when I did we had more fun with love a first kiss could take months but, our love developed over time. Excellent write my friend!
Vionet Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 6:30 AM
Thank you =]
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