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remember PARTIES?? *sigh*
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A party scene, in Senryus - from last March, when a party could happen. He looked at me like a treat. “You,” he said, are looking hot girl!" “I’m only hot in in the dazzling reflection of your lust,” I said. “Then you’re on FIRE,” he said as he put his hands on my hips. “Your girlfriend’s looking,” I said, - she and I nodded. His hands retracted. He brushed his hair back over his ears, "some other time.” he said. “He was set to jump you,” My friend Kim teased, "No, not really.” I shrugged. "You disappointed?" I snorted "yeah right, His GF was watching." "OH!," Kim realized, "You were posing!! You're STILL a virgin - I KNOW!!” “SHUT UP!!” I laughed, putting a hand to her lips, “That’s secret info!” “Sophomores are ALWAYS virgins.” Kim said, “Not Lisa, of course." We turned, smiled, and waved at Lisa - she was dating three guys. Kim says, “She could give us both one.” "Leftovers," I said, “should mean pizza.”

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Date: 9/22/2020 9:16:00 AM
Ah, yes, I remember parties...I wrote a poem about a party scene not long ago, "Forever in Delirium" more of an adult party but the thought is the same.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 9/22/2020 11:47:00 AM
Too much corona danger for parties NOW... I must be cursed - but, of course, I'm not egocentric enough to think this whole mess was just to punish ME =] Just a happy... coincidence.
Date: 9/22/2020 5:05:00 AM
It's been years and years since I was young dating sure has changed over time, I am glad I grew up when I did we had more fun with love a first kiss could take months but, our love developed over time. Excellent write my friend!
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Date: 9/22/2020 6:30:00 AM
Thank you =]

Book: Shattered Sighs