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At the Mountains of Madness

I hunger for crumbs that others discard As I crawl through the sewers whose treasures I guard I'm silent and deafening as on nightmares I creep At the mountains of madness is where I find sleep. Today's a good day, I might give you a wink As you shudder and hurry away from my stink And that's when the voices and longings increase At the mountains of madness I find me some peace. Don't worry, you can't catch what's eating my soul No more than some pills and a shrink make me whole I've pleaded and begged that I'd die or be healed At the mountains of madness is where I have kneeled. The voices are louder and I'm shrinking in size I'm screaming for help but It swallows my cries I want it to end but I'm tired and I'm stumped At the mountains of madness, I finally jumped. Date: 2016

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Date: 8/6/2016 2:31:00 PM
Your words cry out the desperation with such a powerful poem !! Congratulations on a remarkable poem!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 8/6/2016 4:00:00 PM
Thank you! And thanks for taking the time to comment!
Date: 8/6/2016 8:24:00 AM
This poem made me think of my dad. You expressed mental illness in a believable way.congrats on your win.
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 8/6/2016 8:41:00 AM
Thank you. I am surrounded by family members who are mentally ill. I wish more people in the government understood them.
Date: 8/6/2016 2:10:00 AM
CindiCongratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my blog "BOSSY COW." if you'd like, enjoy my sheer, simple madness. Hugs ~LINDA~
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 8/6/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 5/25/2016 8:33:00 AM
Very n ice flow to your write! Congrats on your placement
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Date: 5/24/2016 4:53:00 PM
A powerful write, Cindi. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/24/2016 4:00:00 PM
Wow. What a heartbreaking last line, so well executed. The despair of this piece was palpable. Thanks for participating in my contest. Check out my blog and tell me about your poem :)
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 5/24/2016 4:11:00 PM
Thank you. Really enjoyed writing for this contest.
Date: 5/18/2016 10:11:00 AM
This was a roller coaster. The word flow captured me fiercely. While I understand the premise of this piece, it almost felt like a Slam piece too. A war against self. Tremendous lines!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 5/18/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank you. A family member deals with severe mental illness and I feel her pain daily.

Book: Shattered Sighs