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Needing rest from debilitating rigors of life? I’m the blessed joy at the core of your heart… offering divine mirth of wondrous delight assuaging blood pressure-surge --- Engage with earnestly me as you pray to God and see your countenance beaming with bliss! Tormented by despair wrecking your night, haunted with guilt?? I’m the granted pardon at the crust of your conscience… confounding you by my mercy and truth aiding you to confess your sins against reality check--- Regard me soberly, while in full trust* you cling to Christ and receive victorious freedom along forgiveness!! Escaping from fears robbing you of serenity’s engulfment gripping your mind around nagging angst??? I’m the assured peace at the abyss of your soul… as promised by the Scriptures ready to thwart your miseries--- Claim me humbly from the Saviour and ascend toward praise-driven worship fervency!!! Constantly constrained for earnest service while prodded against selfish vain as you struggle from arrogance to withstand temptations, trying your fortitude???? I’m the divine nature at the innermost of your faith… miraculously transforming you from carnality vanquishing doubts, prayerlessness, unbelief--- Yield to me in your surrender to the Holy Spirit and live triumphantly for the Sovereign God Who loves you!!!!
*Psalm 118:8 It is better to trust in the LORD than to put confidence in man. June 19, 2020 8th place, "Your Best Free Verse That You Wrote" Premier Poetry Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke; judged on 6/19/2020.

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Date: 6/22/2020 1:37:00 AM
What a soothing melody Beata! Glad I got to read your gracious words. I could feel blessed reading through your emotions. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/21/2020 8:14:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Beata, as is the lovely psalm that inspired it. Surrender to the Holy Spirit is a game-changer. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Chantelle's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/19/2020 7:32:00 PM
You have some great lines here, "I’m the granted pardon at the crust of your conscience…, I’m the assured peace at the abyss of your soul…,I’m the divine nature at the innermost of your faith…The idea of inserting these and others are inspiring...
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Date: 6/19/2020 3:09:00 PM
A lovely piece Beata telling well of God's wonderful grace for those that believe. A joy to read, Blessings always, Gordon
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Date: 6/19/2020 2:13:00 PM
Beata, I enjoyed reading this free verse description of God's blessings bestowed upon those who believe. They indeed impact us at the "core", "crust", "abyss", and "innermost" parts of our soul. Congratulations on your winning write! Grace and peace ~ John
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