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At the Grave/ the Finale

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                                       As he stood by the grave and wept



                                         She was lowered into the ground

deathfantasyimaginationimagism

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Phillip Sohn

February 21, 2010 at 3:47 PM

Wow, the power behind imagism is really getting to me now. Thank you for this write. Please read my poems.

Carolyn Devonshire

February 17, 2010 at 2:40 PM

A scene with which we become all too familiar throughout our lives, Sara. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Edward Ford

February 14, 2010 at 12:10 PM

That touched me especially because I lost my fiancee a decade ago, I've since learned to except a great deal about life and death, the ache still remains but I smile every time I'm reminded of her, thank you Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 10, 2010 at 6:29 AM

Sara, You have written many very nice imagism poems. Good luck in Brian's contest. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Doris Culverhouse

February 8, 2010 at 1:31 PM

sad write, death is hard on those left behind.

John Beam

February 7, 2010 at 6:45 PM

thanks for your comment on poem and I am glad thats not the end blessings

Jeralynn Clark

February 7, 2010 at 2:37 PM

Ah, a familiar experience for all. Ground braking work Sara! :) soup mail

Gert W. Knop

February 7, 2010 at 7:39 AM

reminds me of the funeral of my late uncle in december last year. Very emotional write, Sara, and thank you for your comments..Gert

Abraham L

February 7, 2010 at 4:57 AM

very emotional. i have made a promise that i am going to live and enjoy my life. not to wait until i am not able to do those things i wanted to do. great write. and thanks for your comments Abe

Brian Strand

February 7, 2010 at 12:57 AM

Full of emotion a familiar scene Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and Kind words.

Lynette Chachere

February 7, 2010 at 12:45 AM

small poem. huge emotional effect. beautiful&sad. break an arm and leg!hah. -Always Lynette

Connie Marcum Wong

February 7, 2010 at 12:25 AM

Sara, Funerals are always difficult to bear and to know you are saying that last good-bye. A wonderful poem for the contest. Best of luck. Blessings, Connie