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At the Gates

Knocking into a golden gate
A familiar face approaches
Staring and observing my fate
And it's tough for me to process

They let me in past the doorway
A thinness in the air embrace
The vision seems a bit starry
Wandering in this solemn place

Walking past in the grandeur hall
A hand guides me through a stoa
Marching with my hand on the wall
Snuffling scent of lush aroma

Reaching the end of the journey
A man queries with supple voice
Asking if I am that worthy
I responded yes with rejoice

With the increasing shriek of rooks
He patted me and confided 
You are not written in the books
Then swiftly woke up alighted




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August 30,2018

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