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At the End of the Road

At the End of the Road
Stop begging me to stay! Don’t act like you don’t know, our journey ends right here - my answer is still “NO!”
Once you were my pleasure, but now you’re my poison. Your type of love is toxic; so that’s my real reason.
I’m tired of these rocky roads, and done with the games you play. I’m dizzy from your ups and downs; it’s time we call it a day!
Let’s make this nice and easy- I don’t want you to cry. Let’s have no handshake, no hug, nor a last kiss good-bye.
Stop begging me to stay! Surely by now you should know, we reached the end of our road… as love left us long ago!
01-06-2017 Contest: Poet's Choice - The End of the Road - Just Friends Sponsor: Silent One Placment: 6th

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Date: 2/10/2018 12:19:00 PM
Nicely put. Well done, Pandita.
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Date: 2/10/2018 12:33:00 PM
Line thank you so much your superlative compliment which is a source of encouragement to me! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/4/2017 6:37:00 PM
Deep and beautifully written.
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Date: 5/5/2017 11:44:00 AM
Hi Trisha, thank you so much for visiting and leaving your lovely compliments! Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 3/6/2017 10:37:00 AM
Pandita, love this one. Deep and i felt the pain in saying goodbye.
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Date: 3/8/2017 1:26:00 PM
Hi Karen, I'm glad that you stopped by and thank you kindly for your wonderful compliment and feedback! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/18/2017 7:06:00 AM
A very moving piece; thank you so much for sharing.
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:47:00 AM
Dear John, what a lovely compliment! Thank you so much for the super encouragement which mean a lot to me! Pandita
Date: 2/8/2017 9:41:00 AM
Well done with this Pandita! I admire your straightforwardness and I bet many can relate to this. :)
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Date: 2/8/2017 10:46:00 AM
Thank you so very much, my dear Heidi! We have to know when it's time to move on - no point holding on to any relationship that is toxic or that has issues which can't be fixed! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 2/4/2017 9:07:00 AM
You are a very good poet, I really enjoyed It x
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Date: 2/4/2017 9:24:00 AM
Wendy, thank you so much your superlative compliments which is a source of encouragement for me! Thanks for making my day! Pandita
Date: 1/19/2017 9:45:00 AM
A strong write Pandita. I'm not sure I could be so straight forward about the end of a relationship.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 1/19/2017 8:45:00 PM
Hi James, it's so nice to hear from you and receive your kind compliments! Actually I am a firm believer that when a relationship breaks down and there are no fixes, then I should be straightforward and firmly end it - not callously but as gently as possible of course :-)! Best wishes. Pandita
Date: 1/6/2017 11:38:00 AM
But road soon makes a beautiful turn. This car races on too fast. Do not, this dear true love thus spurn For love, this may be your last.... Love your verses, couldn't resist slinging a few myself. Great poem.....
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Date: 1/8/2017 5:06:00 PM
Many thanks, my dear Robert for stopping by and leaving your great compliments which I appreciate! Pandita
Date: 1/6/2017 9:53:00 AM
Ouch! I was so looking forward to a kiss:) Haven't seen you posting in a while. So glad to see you again, Pandita. (and I'm still loving that name) Good luck!
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Date: 1/6/2017 10:53:00 AM
Aaaah, thank you Daniel for your awesome compliments. It's good to be back and I'm happy that you stopped by! Have a lovely weekend, my friend! Pandita
Date: 1/6/2017 8:05:00 AM
Hi Pandita, Happy New Year! I love this piece which makes it quite clear what it means when love is gone - sadly, it's the end of the road for a relationship. A 7 and good luck in the contest! Kika
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Date: 1/6/2017 8:12:00 AM
Hi Kika, thank you very much and I wish you a Happy New Year too! Enjoy the weekend and stay warm! Pandita