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At the End of the Road

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At the end of the road you will find nothing but yourself looking at you behind the years you missed. At the end of the road you will search for the friends you have never cared about. At the end of the road you will be lost in a small path, asking for somebody to show you the road to walk through. At the end of the road you will meet you with yourself, walking lost on an empty road without any support.

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/28/2023 3:04:00 PM

Life is what happens between physical birth and physical death. Living is how you choose to interact with all of creation between those same to points. Quote by Bill Baker I enjoyed your poem today, Maria, it was very thought-provoking. It made me stop and ponder upon how I am living my life today. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/28/2023 6:43:00 PM

If you enjoyed my poem, better enjoy the song.That's really worth. Hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/28/2023 6:41:00 PM

If you enjoyed my poem, better enjoy the song.That's really worth. Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/27/2023 2:16:00 PM

a wise and truthful poem with wisdom thrown in. We all reap what we when we're at the end of our road. Well said!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/27/2023 11:57:00 PM

Hello Sara. Thank you for your lovely comment. Hugs...!

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/26/2023 4:08:00 PM

Dear Maria- what a beautiful poem my friend. Very poignant with a well expressed clear message. The picture you’ve chosen is perfect to accompany your words full of wisdom and indeed a warning of just how much life could be lonely and precious things that could be lost if you don’t open your heart to others. A life without love is a life not lived at all and a long, lonely road ahead. Loved it! Hugs and smiles dear friend xx :):)

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/27/2023 12:25:00 AM

Good morning my friend. You are right, a life alone makes it longer. Thanks Christina for your always lovely words. Have a wonderful dayxxx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2023 3:39:00 AM

How foolish a person can be not to acknowledge that we all need friends. Truly a wonderful, eye-opening poem. Blessings.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/26/2023 6:15:00 AM

Hello Victor. Unfortunately it happens a lot nowadays. Thank you so much for your lovely wordsxxxx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/23/2023 9:28:00 PM

I can really relate to this, beautiful poetry.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/24/2023 1:56:00 AM

Hello Arthur. Thanks a lot for your comment. Hugs

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/22/2023 3:50:00 AM

Maria; I hope that this isn't the end of the road; a good, but bleak poem. George Harrison sang. "If you don't know where you're going/ Any road can take you there." I like to think of what Lao Tzu said. "It's better to travel well then reach the end."

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/22/2023 3:56:00 AM

You are right Jeff. But, unfortunately sometimes it happens. We all hope not to be in that case or situation. Thank you for your comment Jeff. Have a great dayxxx

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/21/2023 11:10:00 PM

enlightning poem, Maria, you are so right, it is true for everyone, i felt emotion while reading, thanks

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/22/2023 12:54:00 AM

Thanks a lot Yann.xxx Have a nice weekend