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At the End of the Forest

A long hot sunny day The sky blue not cloudy A perfect day for a walk Two couples stroll in the woods They both had a picnic lunch Ready for when they are hungry All the birds were full of song Nature was around them With all sorts of trees seen Some standing tall dead Others were coated with leaves There were fallen branches All spread onto the ground The path was hilly Onward they walked in They came to the end To the forest path They saw a beautiful lake It was here they enjoyed a picnic lunch A great day well spent To be near the water side

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D.W. Rodgers

Date: 6/21/2020 9:01:00 PM

A lovley walk brought ot life. Thanks for sharing. Dave

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/22/2020 7:00:00 AM

Hello D.W. Rodgers,Yes a lovely walk brought to life. Enjoy your day my friend.

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/6/2020 6:47:00 PM

Some would say the prefect day

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2020 9:00:00 AM

Hello Christopher , yes some would say a perfect day spent. Enjoy your day my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2020 8:13:00 AM

This poem is so nice. Peaceful. I enjoyed it very much. I hope all is well :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/31/2020 10:56:00 AM

Hello Heidi,yes it is peaceful.It is peaceful to be by the water.Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Gail Debole

Date: 5/30/2020 12:21:00 PM

Beautifully written! Rather be in your poetic world than the grocery store. LOL.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/30/2020 1:15:00 PM

Hello Gail DeBole, so would i Gail. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 5/26/2020 2:04:00 PM

A great spot for a picnic, Wonderful write Darlene..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/26/2020 5:16:00 PM

hello Joseph May,yes that would be a great place for a picnic.Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/25/2020 11:10:00 AM

Really fine piece Darlene, you've penned this with painting nice picture of nature itself. Enjoyed this very much, have a blessed day,Gordon

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/25/2020 2:08:00 PM

Hello Gordon Mc Connell, Thank you for the lovely comment. Nature is beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/25/2020 12:22:00 AM

LOve this, So positive, a poem for today, to brighten one's day, for that thank you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/25/2020 8:40:00 AM

Hello Harry Horseman, I am so pleased that I have brightened your day with this poem. I hope all is well you . Enjoy your day my friend.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/24/2020 2:34:00 PM

Darlene, you have described a beautiful day--perfect for enjoying a time out in nature. Janice

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/24/2020 4:42:00 PM

Hello Janice dy,Thank you Janice. I did see myelf doing this as I created this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. Thank you for the lovely xcomment.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/24/2020 4:22:00 AM

You describe a wonderful day where this couple enjoyed a picnic for two by the waterside - how peaceful and also very romantic it must be - terrific write Darlene my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/24/2020 8:43:00 AM

Hello Jennifer,Hi! yes ican see couples having a picnic by the water side. This is relaxing. thank you for the lovey comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2020 8:15:00 PM

YOu described what sounds like the perfect day, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/24/2020 8:45:00 AM

Hello Andrea,oh it is a perfect day for couples to have a picni by the water. Enjoy your day my fiend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2020 1:02:00 PM

This sounds like a delightful way to spend the day Darlene. I enjoyed the beautiful imagery in this piece! Blessings xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2020 2:08:00 PM

Hello Connie,hi! yes it is a delightful way to spend the day. I am so glad that you enjoyed this poem. Blessings xxxx-oooo.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/23/2020 8:37:00 AM

Such majestic imagery in your verse, Darlene! I could truly feel that I was there. Well done! Happy Saturday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2020 12:19:00 PM

Hello Mike Gentile,Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. A bright sunny day here.Happy Saturday. xxxx-ooooo. Enjoy your day my friend.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/22/2020 5:28:00 PM

Wonderful imagery!! Loved this!!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/22/2020 7:32:00 PM

Swetha Vangaveti,Hi, so nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/22/2020 1:56:00 PM

Lovely Darlene. Beautiful description. Felt like I was there. A fine write. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/22/2020 7:35:00 PM

Helo I felt the same way as I created this poem. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Thomas Wells

Date: 5/22/2020 1:17:00 PM

Hi Darlene I love your narrative style. This leaves me with a warm serenity. Thank you and enjoy your day. :-)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/22/2020 1:41:00 PM

Hello Thomas Wells, you are welcome. Oh I am so pleased to hear this. You made my day bright. Thank you. Enjoy your day my fiend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/22/2020 11:43:00 AM

Hi Darlene' As you know, I, too adore love picnics by the lake. This was just lovely.thank you Live free! Panagiota xoxo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/22/2020 12:52:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, you nd i enjoy to be near the water. Also love picnics. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. hugs Darlene xxx-ooo.

V. Deepa

Date: 5/22/2020 5:28:00 AM

Hi mam, Marvellous trip enjoyed sitting and having our lunch beside blue lake(imagined myself to be there).:-):-) felt realistic!! Have a great day mam:-)

V. Deepa
Date: 5/22/2020 10:50:00 AM

Yes..mam.Its a peaceful picnic. This poem becomes one of my favourite now:-) I too like to observe the waves and listen to its vibes.. My best wishes for all your works.Have a nice day :-)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/22/2020 7:18:00 AM

Hello Deepa, Yes so did I. Having a picnic by the water would be nice. I like the sound of the waves coming to shore. So peaceful. Enjoy your day my friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/21/2020 7:48:00 PM

Beautiful refreshing and restorative setting for a picnic, Darlene! Happy Thursday evening! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/22/2020 7:20:00 AM

Hello Gershon Wolf,yes it is Gershon. Nature and water is beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/21/2020 2:21:00 PM

Sounds like a beautiful day out Darlene. Hope you're well Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/21/2020 2:42:00 PM

Hello Tom Cunningham, Thank you for the lovely comment.Thank you Tom ,yes I am well. I hoe you are well. Enjoy your day my fiend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/21/2020 2:12:00 PM

I just loved the way you take the reader on a stroll with you in this poem, Darlene. Much enjoyed from start to finish...simple, yet elegant.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/21/2020 2:43:00 PM

Hello Vijay Pandit, oh, thank you. I think the forest is beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend. Take care.

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/21/2020 1:56:00 PM

A stroll to the lake, a little picnic, and kiss to seal the day...All the best Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/21/2020 2:48:00 PM

Hello Michael Arturo, yes a stroll to a lake and picnic and a kiss. So romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/21/2020 12:48:00 PM

Sounds like a wonderful day trip. As long as there's no mosquitoes! My walk in the woods yesterday was great, today the mosquitoes were out. Have a lovely day Darlene. xomo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/21/2020 2:55:00 PM

Hello Maureen, A lovely day trip for couples. A walk in the forest with the mosquitoes, is not pleasant. Enjoy your day my friend.