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At the End of My Rope

I study my scowl in the back of a spoon As the Rumbletide ripples in a cup of Joe* The lap desk that holds it is vibrating, too… The window is shattered, my boots bumbletied The knife pricks my neck, right there in the ‘V’ And the fellow who holds the knife is me. __________________ * coffee (Just a note – this is fiction!) February 15, 2019 Submitted for: Reflect That Emotion Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nina Parmenter

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Date: 2/25/2019 6:40:00 PM
Back with much deserved congrats, Andrew.
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Date: 2/23/2019 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrew! love the image of the reflection in the spoon. very expressive.
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/24/2019 1:09:00 AM
Thank you! I HAVE actually studied my face in the back of a spoon, just never in THAT state of mind, Thank God! Congratulations on YOUR win!
Date: 2/23/2019 7:59:00 PM
Your eerie imagery dramatically builds in suspense to the final chilling line that spills with emotion. I enjoyed being roped into your fantastic and captivating poem, Andrew. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/24/2019 1:08:00 AM
Wow! I am really grateful that you found all that in the poem! I never really think about that. Warmest wishes, and Congratulations to YOU!
Date: 2/23/2019 11:43:00 AM
wow, this is AWESOME ( I see someone else used that same word) Well they were RIGHT ON. Congrats for your win. I love this one, Andrew
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/24/2019 1:06:00 AM
Thank you, really appreciate it. That's a high compliment. Congratulations are in order to you, too!
Date: 2/23/2019 10:54:00 AM
Such a clever and brilliant poem, Andrew! Enjoyed this one and congrats on your win! :)
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/24/2019 1:05:00 AM
Thank You, and Congratulations to YOU!
Date: 2/23/2019 10:50:00 AM
Awesome poem, Andrew. Congratulations on your win in Nina's contest! Best wishes, carolyn
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/24/2019 1:05:00 AM
Thank You so very much. It is an honor to place in one of Nina's contests!
Date: 2/23/2019 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations! This write is a little scary—and I appreciate the note of its fiction! Loved “rumbletide ripples in a cup of joe” and “bumbletied”... and the subtle almost brushed over...but powerful metaphor of the shattered window. BRAVO
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/24/2019 1:04:00 AM
Thank You for liking my new words! I am glad I have never intentionally broken a window, or done it in anger. (I actually got the idea from... guess who?) Sorry it was scary, I suppose being at the End of the rope is a little like that, inherently.
Date: 2/23/2019 9:18:00 AM
Hi Andrew, This is a great entry for the contest. I could feel the emotions reflected in this write. Congratulations on your 4th place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/24/2019 1:01:00 AM
I appreciate your good words! And I am glad the emotion reached out to you.
Date: 2/23/2019 9:15:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Andrew! Janice
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/24/2019 12:59:00 AM
Thank You Kindly!
Date: 2/15/2019 7:04:00 PM
You've painted a bleak picture my friend. I'm always studying mine, but not on the back of a spoon. Nicely done, Andrew, good luck in the contest.
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/15/2019 8:29:00 PM
I am often reluctant to write these kinds of poems -- I think poetry should HELP people and uplift them, not burden them. Anyway, thank you for reading, and for your encouragement.
Date: 2/15/2019 6:23:00 PM
Well done, Andrew. Powerful imagery.
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/15/2019 6:50:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 2/15/2019 4:06:00 PM
Oh wow that's good! Excellent building of tention. Fantastic and original, I smell a winner ;) good luck in the contest! xomo
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/15/2019 5:04:00 PM
Thank You for that! I appreciate your encouragement!

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