At the End of Day

Mid afternoon overhead sun retreats
heading west to bring comfort and solace 
trail of red embers as horizons meet
darkening skies such a treat so flawless,

birds sing their evening songs and lullabies 
daytime temperature becomes subdued 
yet natures great beauty never denies
delightful images not devalued,

our exhausted day falls into slumber
she pulls her dark quilt studded with sequins
over her head with precision lumber
twilight fades as her next shift now begins,

dusk prevails now in her shadowy room
encourage plants, trees to exhale perfume.


7/26/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Man Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Your poetic words are like an evening perfume, Roy!
Pett Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 6:01 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Lyric Man, your comment is so welcome and encouraging. :))
Roper Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Great sonnet with beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Pett Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 4:12 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Eve, your comment certainly gives me some belief in my improvement in my ability to write, thanks again for your support much appreciated.
Pandit Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Lovely imagery of sunset in your charming words, Roy.
Pett Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 4:05 AM
Thank you so much Vijay, your comment is more than encouraging and much appreciated my friend. :))
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July 26, 2018 at 9:36 AM
What an ode to sunset's beauty dear, Roy. A masterpiece of artwork!
Pett Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 3:59 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios your poetic comment is so uplifting and encouraging, I really appreciate your support my friend. :))
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