At the End of Day

Mid afternoon overhead sun retreats
heading west to bring comfort and solace 
trail of red embers as horizons meet
darkening skies such a treat so flawless,

birds sing their evening songs and lullabies 
daytime temperature becomes subdued 
yet natures great beauty never denies
delightful images not devalued,

our exhausted day falls into slumber
she pulls her dark quilt studded with sequins
over her head with precision lumber
twilight fades as her next shift now begins,

dusk prevails now in her shadowy room
encourage plants, trees to exhale perfume.


7/26/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/27/2018 9:16:00 AM
Your poetic words are like an evening perfume, Roy!
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Date: 7/29/2018 6:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Lyric Man, your comment is so welcome and encouraging. :))
Date: 7/26/2018 5:18:00 PM
Great sonnet with beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2018 4:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Eve, your comment certainly gives me some belief in my improvement in my ability to write, thanks again for your support much appreciated.
Date: 7/26/2018 12:06:00 PM
Lovely imagery of sunset in your charming words, Roy.
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Date: 7/27/2018 4:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay, your comment is more than encouraging and much appreciated my friend. :))
Date: 7/26/2018 9:36:00 AM
What an ode to sunset's beauty dear, Roy. A masterpiece of artwork!
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Date: 7/27/2018 3:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios your poetic comment is so uplifting and encouraging, I really appreciate your support my friend. :))
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