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At the Drive-In

back-seated passion
sweaty, urgent grappling
sexy summer sin

naturenostalgiahaiku

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Bl Devnath

November 18, 2012 at 8:27 AM

Congratulation my friend on your win. Excellent poem enjoyed. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Seren Roberts

November 15, 2012 at 2:29 PM

Congratulations Tim ...Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 15, 2012 at 7:05 AM

Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Tim. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

November 15, 2012 at 12:59 AM

Belated congratulations on your win my friend, Tim! hugs, LG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 13, 2012 at 5:32 PM

CONGRATS TIM ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS SULTRY STEAMY SET OF HAIKUS AND A BIG WIN TOO LUV ..

Elizabeth Wesley

November 13, 2012 at 5:26 PM

It means potty time in Canada Tim, must get used to the different meanings these terms have. What's so neat about this is that can be a sweaty urgent time too; probably without the passion though! :) Love, Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich

November 13, 2012 at 4:58 PM

A great one recalling summer days of youth. Congrats with this one, Tim.

Poet Destroyer A

November 13, 2012 at 1:53 PM

Tim, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd

Sara Kendrick

November 13, 2012 at 12:04 PM

Very unique work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Congrats on your win..Sara

Kash Poet

November 13, 2012 at 6:05 AM

Congrats Tim on your win!Very nice haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 13, 2012 at 1:35 AM

Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)