At the Door of a Friend

At the Door of a Friend


With footfalls heavy to this door 
Where I would see my friend no more
What comfort could I hope for me 
Now you’re gone to destiny

No more welcome of the hand 
Just empty space, a rift in sand
And no more face with smile of glee 
That heralds informality

Where will I go to search my soul 
Who will help me reach my goal
Who will stab my selfishness 
Put my mind at ease, at rest

Call me up with sports results 
Suffer my insane insults 
Mark me as a friend indeed 
Be there, in my time of need

Your light was always on for me 
The truth I now stand here and see
Those times of sheer belligerence 
Those wasted hours in ignorance

The fallouts that we often had 
Those times that always felt so bad
Were only testing of our strength 
To know what friendship really meant

Opens the door, she passes note 
I read the words therein you wrote
That scribble, that once so annoyed 
Is more welcome and enjoyed

I smile and read how this is neat 
As all my words above repeat
And more to know when I am gone 
To look and find, that light still on 



Written  24 April 2013
For Becca Lucas Contest; 
What a Friend Really Is.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Manassian Avatar
September 26, 2022 at 11:52 AM
Too bad you don't write anymore. You were really talented as this gem testifies.
Bangalee Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 11:10 PM
far away the dead soul; far away now the best loving soul- but the memories; the happiest memories are still alive in the pot of shocked mind as wailer- it's very heart touching poetic writing for a best friend
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 1:58 AM
soupmail for you.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 8:11 AM
I enjoyed reading this heartfelt piece again. Good morning Richard.
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 2:58 PM
I see you were asking about the Long sleep. I don't know what the artist intended for sure, but to me, the man had died in his sleep . wish I could find out if that is what the artist intended by his painting!
Seal Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Would be nce to know, I'll do some research
Duncan Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 12:08 AM
This is very nice indeed Richard ;}
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 11:52 PM
hey, I am seeing you got a win on this one and I had not noticed last time I came here to leave you a note. BIG congrats and I am really happy you liked my recent haiku. thanks for that. I was not sure people were "getting it."
Bacha Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 12:33 PM
Reading your poem and i am in mourning myself over my best friend brother who passed away 3 weeks ago. How i do feel your pain, how much you miss him, how lonely it can get. Life is getting harder and harder to deal with many issues. You do deserve the win, congratulations. Terry xoxo
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 11:06 PM
ok, I think I remember reading your note on that food poem of mine
A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 6:33 PM
Hi Richard, nice to see you on the winning list here... congrats with your friendship theme... :-(...Linda
Hunter Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 10:51 AM
Love where you took this contest, Richard....Congrats!
Oyewole Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 11:07 PM
Heartfelt write and very unique in its way.... Kudos to its PAINTER.... Big Congrats on your win~
Seal Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 9:33 AM
Thank you AO, we all strive to be unique and of course we all are, in our way lol
Jones Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Awesome Richard...congratulations
Seal Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 9:30 AM
Thank you Donna, So are you
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Very heartfelt, congratulations on a great poem.
Seal Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 9:27 AM
Thanks Richard I appreciate your comment, if friendship isn't heartfelt it isn't friendship
Johnson Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Nicely written but very sad also. Wish we had the power to keep them safe. Congratulations. Love, joyce
Seal Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 9:24 AM
We do joyce. Thanks for the comment
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Ahhh...Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
Seal Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Thank you Sara, appreciate our comment
Carrillo Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 9:20 AM
Richard; I have to say that this made me cry. It is so touching. may the light always remain on. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla
Seal Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 6:14 PM
You're a wonderful lady and friend to me Lucilla, Thank you
Hicks Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 1:55 AM
Thanks for reading The Golden Standard, earlier today. I understand my views on things is at times a bit naive, due to lack of experience and years. I just wanted to say I was letting go a pile of frustrations that were building up, when I wrote that. And I've replied to both of your comments...
Seal Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 6:10 PM
That's ok Tim, we all have to let go at times
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 2:18 PM
- It's written so many beautiful poems about friends this week, the best poem will win the contest - hope it will be yours Richard! - Good luck! - Have a beautifully weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Seal Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 2:29 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, the comment below should have gone to PD, I'm just hopeless at these boxes at mo. Thank you for the comment, I've already said Becca will struggle judging this contest, I wouldn't wonder if she's not regretting it already lol
Seal Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 2:18 PM
If you know wher to look, there always is 'someone who cares', I've found that out a few times. Thank you for the grin, my Sweet Dark Friend
A   Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 6:40 PM
Richard, this is nice lovely... she sounds like true friend, someone who will be there for you. Pick your spirit up. I love the last four lines. They remind me og the feeling... ""SOMEONE ALWAYS CARES"".... ENJOYED~ You are special to me. Always ... the forever grin~LINDA
Seal Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 2:23 PM
Bang goes my techno cred again, Have gone an stuck you in Anne Lise reply box lol, I need looking after or a bib lol.
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 6:34 PM
thanks, Richard, for the fave. I had a ball doing that poem. Go write one about food now yourself.
Seal Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 2:15 PM
I'll answer this in your comment box lol
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 5:43 PM
yes, the light still on.... that says it all, Richard. I can tell you must make a marvelous friend. I think you did a good job portraying it thru this contest poem!
Seal Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Andrea, I feel I'm one of those lucky ones, I walk through town and at least half a dozen peeps stop me for a chat. sometimes ones I have not seen for years, funny thing is they call me by whatever name it is they remember me by, which is anything from a dog to an unmentionable, but they always greet me with a smile, can't beat that.
Manassian Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 12:16 PM
Richard....I consider you a dear friend. You've been so supportive and kind in your comments. You tease and lighten my spirit. Hope we never fall out! ;) BTW...the door is always open.
Manassian Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 9:51 PM
Hello! :) Thanks for asking about me and reading my earlier work. You are an awesome. Yes, I'm OK...I answered your post there. Waiting for a new poem from you, Richard. Auntie says hurry up and be good about it.
Seal Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 12:29 PM
You know my light will always be on for you Eileen. Feel free to stab my selfishness, it might hurt but I wont bleed :)
Hicks Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 10:03 AM
Becca sure is going to have a difficult time judging this contest! I loved the sincerity in this - especially the part about "smiling being a herald of informality". When you don't feel obligated to smile and just do it naturally you know you're around someone that is a true friend!
Seal Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 11:13 AM
Am smiling :)
Hendricks Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 8:22 AM
You describe friendship really well, right down to the fall-outs. Good luck in the contest with this strong entry. :)
Seal Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 11:11 AM
I'm easy to fall out with lol, but the best understand, that's what makes them the best.
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