At the Crack of Dawn

listen to the 
sweet corn
spark
as 
i
run for joy
at 
the 
crack of dawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 13, 2009 at 5:54 AM
perhaps..spark in line 3 so the final line has a bigger bang? Light & Love
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