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At the Crack of Dawn

listen to the 
sweet corn
spark
as 
i
run for joy
at 
the 
crack of dawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/13/2009 5:54:00 AM
perhaps..spark in line 3 so the final line has a bigger bang? Light & Love
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