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in a meditative sway the waves come and go lapping against the shore in their calm soothing rhythm and all i can do is sit humbly and watch breathing in the peace that surrounds me posted on February 25, 2025

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Date: 2/27/2025 8:39:00 PM
so soothing
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/28/2025 3:30:00 AM
thank you very much ~
Date: 2/26/2025 3:07:00 AM
Lovely!There is something about the pace of the waves' sound that is soothing indeed. I love your first line, with the sway, then the waves to match the sound. J :)
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Date: 2/26/2025 5:20:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jeanette.

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