Notes About The Poem

at the break of dawn

on my own breathing in the peace that surrounds me
in meditative sway the waves come and go
lapping against the shore in their calm soothing rhythm
and all i can do is sit humbly and watch



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Seeker Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 8:39 PM
so soothing
Gauthier Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 3:30 AM
thank you very much ~
Swan Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 3:07 AM
Lovely!There is something about the pace of the waves' sound that is soothing indeed. I love your first line, with the sway, then the waves to match the sound. J :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 5:20 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jeanette.
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