Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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THIS IS WRITTEN ABOUT AN OLD FRIEND (WE NO LONGER ARE IN CONTACT I COULDN'T BEAR TO SEE HER AS SHE IS NOW) - LAST TIME I SAW HER HUSBAND SHE WAS IN HOSPITAL - HER LIVER IS FAILING... YET SHE REFUSES TO GET HELP - SHE DID GO TO A HEALTH FARM WHERE HER HUSBAND THOUGHT IT WOULD GET HER AWAY FROM THE BOOZE .... THEN HE GOT THE BAR BILL :-(

At the Bottom of the Bottle

Trapped at the bottom of a bottle of wine
One taste on your lips – you think it’s divine
But look at yourself you’re an utter mess
Still in your dressing gown, not in a dress

Your business is failing your marriage is too
Yet you refuse to see what it’s doing to you
Your husband finds bottles hidden by the bed
All over the house  - even in the garden shed

Yet you refuse to get help you don’t think it is wrong
We are fed up of hearing the same old sad song
Go to rehab  - you promised to rebuild your life
Get back to how you were, a mother and wife

You need help to get over this affliction
Open your eyes, YOU have alcohol addiction

Jan Allison
20th August 2014

Written for Addictive Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Just that Archaic Poet

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Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2016 at 6:56 PM Jan, I am so sad, What happened to the contest pages?? They are not nice and big. And when I click on them, they show server error. How can I enter a contest? My contest is not even showing over there. What am I not seeing???? are people able to find and get onto contests???? Jan Allison April 23, 2016 at 6:58 PM will mail you xx

Rockman Pritts May 31, 2015 at 1:00 AM There are only two kinds of people who witness this situation. The one who drains the bottle and the others who see it. Unfortunately, I am the one. I have exhausted every possible hiding spot, but my wife can always sniff them out. If you could weigh shame and addiction on a balancing scale, I'm sure that addiction would weigh heavier. Jan Allison May 31, 2015 at 3:17 AM That is such an honest comment Rockman I do hope that you are able to deal with this addiction - breaks my heart to see what it has done to our friends - and there are many here who do have issues - someone said out Island is 64,000 alcoholics clinging to a rock - thankfully I am not one of them I am almost tee total but I can see many reasons why people do take this route. Hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh August 22, 2014 at 6:25 AM This is a wonderful poem about a sad situation. I have seen it many times with family members. Great writing and God bless you. Love and prayers for this woman and her family and you too, Gina Jan Allison August 22, 2014 at 7:46 AM Thanks Regina it's such a sad sad situation addiction of any sort - affects not only the addict but the family and friends too:-( Hugs jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 3:55 AM Sad you made me remember my grandfather who really is also an alcoholic..:( understanding and great sacrifice is needed in this... Jan Allison August 22, 2014 at 4:30 AM They are constantly breaking up and getting back together - breaks my heart to see what addiction is doing - killing her and her family it is so so sad but until she reaches out for help nothing can be done:-( Hugs jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 3:56 AM Reflective thought provoking and heart pulling poem.. Your second stanza makes my heart cry for the husband ..

Lucilla Carrillo August 20, 2014 at 6:44 PM Great poem Jan. Some people never want to admit that they have a problem. I also wrote a poem- Devil Inside A Bottle. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Jan Allison August 21, 2014 at 2:11 AM Oh Lucilla it is so lovely to see you here thanks for the lovely comment:-) God bless hugs jan xxx

Casarah Nance August 20, 2014 at 2:34 PM wow. that is a hard thing to do, habits are hard to break and it's hard to stand without a crutch. but to find a way to stand without addiction the world would be a better place to be Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 3:03 PM Most definitely Casarah:-) Hugs jan xxx

J. R. Corbin August 20, 2014 at 11:58 AM Oh man! This so sadly describes the situation for so many unfortunate people, - a few of which are my friends. I have lost friends and relatives. I would make them all read your words if I could. Thank you Jan. Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 12:06 PM Breaks my heart J. R - seems there is an alcohol problem on the Island - it was once described to me as 40,000 alcoholics clinging to a rock! (population is only about 85,000 so that would be a worrying statistic if it was really true!!!) Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith August 20, 2014 at 11:21 AM Another beautiful sad story Jan....I'm coming over to capture that muse....I want happy :)....hugs Tim Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 12:03 PM :-) you are a special friend thank you :-) xx Tim Smith August 20, 2014 at 11:55 AM That's what friends do :) Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 11:51 AM Just been blown away by his poem LOL and thanks for making me smile my friend:-) Hugs jan xxx Tim Smith August 20, 2014 at 11:46 AM Eliison...read his poem :) Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 11:45 AM ??? Jack Tim Smith August 20, 2014 at 11:41 AM No but if you get to close to Jack it might keel over from the stench :) Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 11:36 AM At least the remaining cell wont get destroyed by alcohol! Hugs back :-) :-) Jan xx Tim Smith August 20, 2014 at 11:31 AM I am just happy to have the company of you and your brain cell :) hugs :) Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 11:29 AM Unfortunately Happy is with the other dwarfs and Snow White in fantasy land Tim! Just got bird brain here instead for the day - at least i am writing - the humour was yesterday in the footles - will be back tomorrow:-) Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Country Girl48 August 20, 2014 at 11:19 AM Loved this one too because that was my ex through and through Country Girl48 August 20, 2014 at 11:31 AM That's true too. My father died because of that and I never got to meet him. Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 11:27 AM Such a sad sad situation Melanie - she knows she needs help but refuses to get it at the moment - sadly soon it will be too late and it breaks my heart to think of her as she is now . The once thriving business is failing, as is the marriage, but she can't see past the bottom of the next glass. My sister's ex boyfriend died from liver failure due to his addiction - he was only 40. I am glad I am almost tee total - have a very rare drink now and again - have no issue with people drinking as long as it is in moderation - it causes so many social problems :-) Hugs Jan x