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At the Beach

At the beach everything sways and swoons the palm trees by the sea grow sleepy with the heat I'll offer you shade on this sun burned carpet of sand as the misty salt kissed wind crosses the waters from far off horizon... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/27/2014 10:34:00 PM
So beautiful Ken. You are the best. . Hugs ~SKAT~
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/27/2014 10:58:00 PM
Thank you Skat..Good to read from you..
Date: 3/27/2014 2:18:00 PM
Every word reminds me of summer. It can't come soon enough; especially now that it's officially spring and we had a little snow the other day.
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Date: 3/27/2014 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Robert for visiting my humble verse today!
Date: 3/27/2014 1:59:00 PM
i like the sandy feel of this write.. how refreshing,ken!.. it;s summer here!.. huggs!
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Date: 3/27/2014 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Nette for the awesome comment!
Date: 3/27/2014 1:55:00 PM
- I wish I were there!! - Beautifully written, Ken! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 3/27/2014 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Anne, we'd love to have you here on the coast as a guest!

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