Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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At Surf Breaking

At surf breaking, plot emotion
In play of innocence 
Make void centric meditation 
Blissful luminescence 

Joy continuum thus
Without making a fuss
We go where God takes us

Simply looking 
At surf breaking

03-January-2022
Quietus 

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Gershon Wolf January 3, 2022 at 6:09 PM 'We go where God takes us' -- So comforting and inspiring, Seeker. Thank you, gw Unseeking Seeker January 3, 2022 at 7:50 PM :)

Victor Buhagiar January 3, 2022 at 1:33 AM You write these quietus with such ease. Well writ. Unseeking Seeker January 3, 2022 at 4:50 AM Thanks Victor! Yes, this form kind of ‘came to me’

Mystic Rose Rose January 2, 2022 at 10:13 PM lol, we go without making a fuss. What a beautiful way to follow Him, into the waters of trust and dream. Nicely written, thankyou for always embezzling my mind Seeker :) Unseeking Seeker January 3, 2022 at 4:49 AM So happy you enjoyed, Mystic Rose!