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At Sunrise

Rinsed clean
yesterday's sun
tiptoes across the dawn
washed by last night's dream of rainbows
refreshed

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For Sara's Cinquain contest
6/9/15

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Sara Kendrick

June 16, 2015 at 11:05 AM

Thanks for your participation in my contest..Congrats on your placement..Sara

Carrie Richards

June 16, 2015 at 11:56 AM

Thank you for the placement, Sara !! :)

Constance La France

June 14, 2015 at 3:54 PM

Carrie, beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my haiku

Emile Pinet

June 12, 2015 at 1:44 PM

This is very beautiful and so well penned. I thought that the ending was very clever and closed this poem with style. Emile. #7

Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2015 at 11:59 PM

ditto what Jan said!! And congrats, Carrie.

Eve Roper

June 11, 2015 at 4:59 PM

Congratulations on your win, hugs dear friend Eve

Skat A

June 11, 2015 at 3:52 PM

Carrie, Congratulations........ SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2015 at 2:10 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA"

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 10:10 AM

I cant believe this placed so low Carrie I personally thought it was outstanding! hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 10:28 AM

Yes it is not an exact science lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards

June 11, 2015 at 10:17 AM

Thank you, Jan......."the eye of the beholder" is different for everyone, and do understand that we can't know what will appeal to everyone, everytime ! :) But thank you !!