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This is a collaboration poem that I was honored to do with Mystic Rose. This is my first chance to write with her and I am forever grateful to her for sharing her talent. She wrote most of it and I helped out with a couple of lines. She has the softness of a rose and the beauty of a bouquet, with a heart as big and beautiful as the entire garden. I hope to do more in the future. Thank you, Vie. xxx

At Summer's End Collaboration With Mystic Rose

At summer"s end when all the flowers tuck away
I still have you, to laugh and share my days
when autumn rolls around and heat is gone
I still have you, to share a moments bless

At winter"s door when all the trees lay bare
I still have you to warm this hearted lair
Awakened by the spring's invited breath
I still have you to love, at break of dawn

With you, as sun, these seasons have no say
When summer ends and flowers tuck away
I pray no matter how the seasons range
The growing love I have for you will softly change 




Written Mystic Rose
 and a slight assist by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duet Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Such a sweet romantic poem. I love it!
Lane Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 5:54 AM
Very well united, Danny. A most enjoyable read.
Turner Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 6:23 AM
Thank you, Peaches. I was very humbled when Vie asked me to write with her. It's always fun for me and you know me it's also very flattering. Glad you came to visit. Peace my dear sweet Peach:)
Quigley Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:50 PM
Great poem! How does a collaboration work?
Turner Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 11:01 PM
On this one she wrote the first stanza, I wrote the second stanza then we collaborated on the last stanza (she wrote most of it I just threw in a couple of suggestions). Usually one writer writes the first half then the other finishes with their answer. This was the first I have done this way. she's very easy to work with as they all have been. Thank you for your support. Peace my friend:)
Smith Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Nice collab but does this young lady no what she's getting into. Thought you had a new roommate?
Turner Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 9:49 PM
LOL. She's married, I think and Buddy loves everybody. Thanks for dropping in and sharing a smile. Peace my friend:)
Smith Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Wonderful collaboration Vie and DT.
Turner Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Thank you, Tim. Man, am I lucky or what? All these beautiful and talented women writing poems with me. I think I've died and gone to heaven. Peace my friend:):)
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