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At Summer's Dusk

As dusk descends, magenta streaks the sky and silence dominates the countryside, where corn stalks in the farmers’ fields stand high. I watch a bird across this vista glide. It swoops behind a willow; I embrace vast beauty which before me I behold while breathing eventide! Across my face a light breeze ripples. I’ve no need of gold or city’s glitter. Silver I prefer - that silver which will shimmer very soon as dusk turns into night and stars appear in myriads, surrounding gibbous moon. And flickering around me now as though to imitate the stars, how the fireflies glow! July 30, 2018 for Emile Pinet's Dusk Or Dawn (New Poems Only) Poetry Contest Now used for John Hamilton's Super Sonnet Premium Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/17/2018 4:51:00 PM
Excellent use of imagery, Andrea. You described everything perfectly and created such a serene setting. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2018 1:20:00 PM
Such a beautiful sonnet which appeals to the senses; love the light and gentle movements that I can feel throughout. As usual, you make great use of enjambment! ~ Congratulations, Andrea, on a very fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 12/17/2018 12:03:00 PM
This is probably my fave poem from you Andrea, and is a very worthy winner in my contest. Although not a fan of enjambment(you know with me flow and rhyme are EVERYTHING) I could not ignore the greatness that is OBVIOUS in this write!
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Date: 12/17/2018 11:50:00 AM
Love your enjambment! Congrats.
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Date: 8/7/2018 3:47:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Andrea. Your poem certainly has a 'silver tongue.' Best wishes, Gershon '
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Date: 8/6/2018 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
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Date: 8/5/2018 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on you win in Brian's contest-- I like the way you mix images of color and the senses, and especially like the metaphor in the last couplet.
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Date: 8/3/2018 9:56:00 PM
A beauty, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 8/3/2018 4:00:00 PM
Nicely done, Andrea. Love the silver infusing the last six lines. Perfect! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/2/2018 1:53:00 PM
I am a night owl and do my best writing when the moon is full. I believe in magic and the picture created here is nothing short of magical.
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Date: 8/2/2018 12:12:00 PM
This is one of my favs
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Date: 8/2/2018 4:33:00 AM
A very peaceful serene sonnet with beautiful imagery, Andrea, best of luck. John
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Date: 8/1/2018 9:32:00 PM
Lovely Summer images!
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Date: 8/1/2018 1:16:00 PM
A lovely summer scene Andrea..nicely penned
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Date: 8/1/2018 10:38:00 AM
WOW, WOW, WOW! A Huge Fav! Love, love, love this sonnet. As an aside I took your advice and edited and reformed the last poem I posted. I posted the rewrite. I would love your feedback if you get a chance.
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Date: 8/1/2018 1:28:00 AM
How beautiful, my friend. A poem joy. I intend to catch up on your writes, long to, in fact. I doubt I'll enter this contest, but I've no doubt you'll do quite well. About my poem, "Taking Care of Me", to answer you: no, not about me, I may not be super DEEP clean, but I must have tidy. Thinking about housekeeping, past stepchildren, messes over the years made the fiction easy. I did, however, once name dust bunnies - just once. Love ya ... CayCay
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Date: 7/31/2018 4:49:00 PM
A lovely sonnet and entry for the contest Andrea. Best wishes to see this a top winner. : )
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Date: 7/31/2018 2:37:00 PM
A wonderful sonnet, Andrea. It is definitely the simple things in life that bring the most pleasure, is it not?
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Date: 7/31/2018 10:07:00 AM
This is over the top good, it could win awards easy
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Date: 7/31/2018 8:39:00 AM
This is a great poem with a wonderful flow, I wish you best of luck in the contest,
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:50:00 AM
Great flow and scenic details in your poem Andrea..a well written Sonnet..best for a win.
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Date: 7/31/2018 2:19:00 AM
Beautifuly dusk sonnet Andrea, another of natures gems. Tom
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