At Summer's Dusk

As dusk descends, magenta streaks the sky
and silence dominates the countryside,
where corn stalks in the farmers’ fields stand high.
I watch a bird across this vista glide.
It swoops behind a willow; I embrace
vast beauty which before me I behold
while breathing eventide! Across my face
a light breeze ripples. I’ve no need of gold
or city’s glitter. Silver I prefer -
that silver which will shimmer very soon
as dusk turns into night and stars appear
in myriads, surrounding gibbous moon.
And flickering around me now as though
to imitate the stars, how the fireflies glow!

July 30, 2018 for Emile Pinet's Dusk Or Dawn (New Poems Only) Poetry Contest
Now used for John Hamilton's  Super Sonnet Premium Poetry Contest
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Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Excellent use of imagery, Andrea. You described everything perfectly and created such a serene setting. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
Callus Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Such a beautiful sonnet which appeals to the senses; love the light and gentle movements that I can feel throughout. As usual, you make great use of enjambment! ~ Congratulations, Andrea, on a very fine win. Regards // paul
Hamilton Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 12:03 PM
This is probably my fave poem from you Andrea, and is a very worthy winner in my contest. Although not a fan of enjambment(you know with me flow and rhyme are EVERYTHING) I could not ignore the greatness that is OBVIOUS in this write!
Cozart Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 11:50 AM
Love your enjambment! Congrats.
Wolf Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Back with congratulations, Andrea. Your poem certainly has a 'silver tongue.' Best wishes, Gershon '
Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 7:10 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
Carber Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Congrats on you win in Brian's contest-- I like the way you mix images of color and the senses, and especially like the metaphor in the last couplet.
Gauthier Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 9:56 PM
A beauty, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 4:00 PM
Nicely done, Andrea. Love the silver infusing the last six lines. Perfect! Best wishes, Gershon
Stearns Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 1:53 PM
I am a night owl and do my best writing when the moon is full. I believe in magic and the picture created here is nothing short of magical.
Acrich Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 12:12 PM
This is one of my favs
Gondolf Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:33 AM
A very peaceful serene sonnet with beautiful imagery, Andrea, best of luck. John
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 9:32 PM
Lovely Summer images!
May Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 1:16 PM
A lovely summer scene Andrea..nicely penned
Yvonne Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 10:38 AM
WOW, WOW, WOW! A Huge Fav! Love, love, love this sonnet. As an aside I took your advice and edited and reformed the last poem I posted. I posted the rewrite. I would love your feedback if you get a chance.
Godwin Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 1:28 AM
How beautiful, my friend. A poem joy. I intend to catch up on your writes, long to, in fact. I doubt I'll enter this contest, but I've no doubt you'll do quite well. About my poem, "Taking Care of Me", to answer you: no, not about me, I may not be super DEEP clean, but I must have tidy. Thinking about housekeeping, past stepchildren, messes over the years made the fiction easy. I did, however, once name dust bunnies - just once. Love ya ... CayCay
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:49 PM
A lovely sonnet and entry for the contest Andrea. Best wishes to see this a top winner. : )
Turner Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:37 PM
A wonderful sonnet, Andrea. It is definitely the simple things in life that bring the most pleasure, is it not?
Acrich Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 10:07 AM
This is over the top good, it could win awards easy
Ajmal Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:39 AM
This is a great poem with a wonderful flow, I wish you best of luck in the contest,
Pandit Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Great flow and scenic details in your poem Andrea..a well written Sonnet..best for a win.
Cunningham Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 2:19 AM
Beautifuly dusk sonnet Andrea, another of natures gems. Tom
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