At Sea Over Losing Weight

   The Skipper of the Ship
     asked the Vipper of Vip
       to please tone it down on the trip

   The Vipper said, ‘Skip, 
     my tongue always slips
        a few little quips 
          into the end of each line’

     Well, the Skipper sat back
       and finding naught to attack
         ate the third cookie 
           ~ of his afternoon snack

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Date: 2/19/2025 7:35:00 AM
I think on a long sea journey, the last thing I'd be worried about is needing to lose weight ~ lol
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Date: 2/15/2025 6:01:00 PM
Lol! I laughed a much needed laugh when reading this. Thanks for creating something fun!
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Date: 2/15/2025 9:10:00 PM
Good to hear, Kathleen. Keep smiling now! Laughter and levity, Gershon
Date: 2/14/2025 2:29:00 PM
LOL. Hope the boat wasnt the SS Minnow.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/16/2025 8:14:00 PM
It was. How'd you know, Oliver? ~ SS Tuna Fish
Date: 2/14/2025 2:01:00 PM
Interesting. Cookie victims running for their lives like the gingerbread man. It ffunny.
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