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At One With Nature

**************** at one with nature... never gave it thought... it was the way it was, dependant, free! security, belief, something not fraught. we took from nature but gave back. you see. it was the way it was, dependant, free! hunter-gatherers, building up our trust. we took from nature but gave back, you see. if we battled it was to save our crust. hunter-gatherers, building up our trust. reasoning gave us creativity! if we battled it was to save our crust. a power, abused, misused still, badly! reasoning gave us creativity. security, belief, something not fraught! a power, abused, misused, still, badly! at one with nature. never gave it thought. *************************

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Date: 3/26/2018 10:47:00 PM
Most unusual but appealing write, loved it Mick. So creative you hardly notice the pantoum form
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/27/2018 12:12:00 AM
Thank you Reason, appreciated... Mick
Date: 3/26/2018 8:37:00 PM
Amazing creativity Mick!! Bravo!!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/27/2018 12:13:00 AM
Many thanks, Robertina... Mick

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