At One At Last

above mountains I soar like an eagle, taking note of the grandeur below over the sea reflections gleam on ripples mirror images of heaven peace and joy fill my soul arched rainbow seems to climb straight to heaven there in the blue, I feel one with the universe let me show you the way to the clouds atop my wings, you’ll sense the delight seeing Earth’s beauty spinning below splendor of eternal life paints the sky above
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Haick Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 12:26 PM
I feel the peace and serenity in your poem, Seafaress...this is beautiful and makes one appreciate love and faith even more. Take care! Love, Annalise
Chircop Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 8:23 PM
Im rereading this gem.How are you dear?merry xmas...you are deeply missed.
Chachere Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 3:39 PM
the touch of an angel in these wonderful words. and a sight worth while to see above. hope your day is well, Carolyn. lovely write. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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December 7, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Ahh Carolyn...I am soaring over the mountains and sea right there with you...wishing you a happy and peaceful Christmas...may the healing hand of God lift you up to higher ground...please come back soon...you are sorely missed - Tim
Wesley Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 4:36 AM
No people here to spoil the scene; all is peaceful and unspoiled. Makes for a nice place to be. Love, Elizabeth
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October 30, 2012 at 3:32 PM
Hi Carolyn, just dropped in, to say hello... love this wonderful poem, hope you are ok.. hope you are not in that bad weather we are hearing about here in the uk....
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 8:27 PM
Wow, here is one I had not seen. It's really nice, CArolyn. Great theme you chose to portray "at one at last!!"
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 8:27 PM
email me sometime how you are doing.
Devnath  Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 10:30 AM
Excellent imagination ended beautifully with the superb last line. Loved always, bl
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August 2, 2012 at 4:21 AM
Beautiful. My Aunt Teenie, who passed in her sleep yesterday, must certainly see the splendor of eternal life. She was a wonderful, sweet spirited person. This poem takes me there...
Mac Donald Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 5:21 AM
Missing your writes, Carolyn! This one is a beauty, you have always shown us "the way to the clouds" with your writes and comments.:) I hope all's going well with you. Best wishes! Love, Mikki
Horne Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 11:06 AM
Awesome piece here, my friend - very glad to see it was a winner
Chircop Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 10:51 PM
How beautiful this is.. thanks for the journey atop those flying wings... Lovely.Hope you are fine my good friend...Charma
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "#186" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Nair Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 6:29 PM
This beautiful poem leaves me somewhat sad..Congratulations on the win..sending my prayers and best wishes on your way..! Jag
Maverick Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Well done on your win here Carolyn; I am wishing you well from the bottom of my heart always a pleasure to read your words..)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 10:37 AM
congrats Carolyn on a wonderful write and first placwe win for Brian.. another awesome selection of woreds to captivate our eyes .. hope u r feeling a bit better.. many prayers are being sent your way and uplifted for u luv..
Austin Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 10:10 AM
A very vivid, colorful realization. Love, daver
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 11:28 PM
Simply beautiful...every line is uplifting! I hope your feeling better. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Sivey Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:49 PM
You have painted an extremely beautiful write my friend! I just love the descriptions you told as I envisioned every part of your illustrious poem! The scenes you have given are perfect in every way, I felt peace with each line Carolyn! I just hope you felt that peace too! Awesome Work!!
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June 29, 2012 at 1:19 PM
Love it !!! BEAUTIFUL....BEAUTIFUL... - oxox Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Can not find words Carolyn.
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Just Beautiful Carolyn.Love it!!!
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 12:58 PM
Carolyn yep I'll go with you..David
Henderson Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 12:56 PM
You flow and fly like a dove Carolyn. Peace and blessing. Much love for you.
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