At My Dear Brother's Grave

At my dear brother’s grave,
I paid him my respects.
It was a winter’s day.
While standing there I glimpsed
two deer not far away.

At my dear brother’s grave,
the doe drew a bit close,
and then the other deer
(though very haltingly)
was also drawing near.

At my dear brother’s grave,
it seemed those deer nearby
that watched me were a sign
as if they came from God.
It seemed a thing divine.

At my dear brother’s grave,
I thought how he was like
the deer; though still apart
from me, his spirit was
close by to touch my heart
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Hind Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 1:30 PM
This is absolutely beautiful. I loved how the last lines just flowed so well "close by to touch my heart"
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Thanks, Paige
Fisher Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 4:55 PM
This is such a wonderful poem, with the juxtaposition of the beauty of nature with a solemn scene. I like how the last stanza wraps up the story perfectly, Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 10:41 PM
Thanks so much
Beaufort Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 3:55 PM
It's a beautiful story. We do miss our departed brethren. I was thinking about just that today, and you are bringing me back to those thoughts. They never seem to go away and are always lurking.
Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 1:22 PM
Yes, it is amazing how sometimes something can happen that reminds us so much of the deceased. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Maverick Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 11:16 AM
A good and memorable experience here Andrea, may you be Blessed.'
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