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At Least My Thoughts Are Running Across This Paper

At least my thoughts are running across the remains of this paper Laboring through another round of words circling inside my mind I find, I need to take my time with writing chimes and poetry lines for if I stumble across a sentence to short or to long I might turn it around; to jingle it with a song Damn, It's been far too long since I wrote a lick maybe I should be beaten with a riff Going along with my flow ; that's takin years to show this is the first I've written...and I'm not kidding At least my thoughts are running across the remains of this paper

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Date: 3/9/2024 1:37:00 AM
At least indeed. At your best I think. Was going through my old poems and came across a comment from you on poem I wrote in 2016 called baking. I am 70 and fine after beating cancer. Our three children are settled and in good jobs, our eldest daughter is expecting identical twin boys in August. We have a five year old grandson to our younger daughter. He loves school. What have you been up to the last 8 years, Regards David in NZ
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Holly Bohto
Date: 3/9/2024 5:17:00 AM
Hi David. Thank you for your comment. That's great that you r doing well ..
Date: 11/28/2023 1:07:00 PM
Hey...look forward to reading your new poems soon..
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Date: 9/24/2023 2:11:00 AM
Hi Holly I hope you are well... you expressed your feeling very well here..
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Holly Bohto
Date: 9/24/2023 4:10:00 PM
Thank you silent one....hope you r well also..yes getting back on the horse slowly..lol
Date: 9/23/2023 10:20:00 PM
Charming poem about the struggles of writing.
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Holly Bohto
Date: 9/23/2023 10:24:00 PM
Thank you Karen. I need the encouragement..It's been awhile since I wrote more than two sentences.

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