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At First Sight

There once was a vampire named Dwight Who met a lovely lady one night Romance cast its spell They hit it off well Must have been love at first bite 11-12-2022

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 12/29/2022 8:32:00 PM

Haha that's a good one. Great write. Wishing you a wonderful new year ahead.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/5/2022 3:47:00 PM

Ha.. I love this ! Great ending ! Susan :)

Robert Gorelick

Date: 11/21/2022 3:27:00 PM

Maybe it was really love at first fright! Good one, Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2022 3:32:00 PM

very nicely done, and I think I remember a movie on love at first bite! Now there is a limerick for it!

Anselmo Boles

Date: 11/19/2022 11:04:00 AM

Another one bites the dust. Succinctly funny, Joseph!...ab

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/15/2022 7:17:00 PM

Ha ha, love this one, Joseph:)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/15/2022 5:45:00 AM

Adorable. I love it. God bless you with many more. Love, Gina

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/14/2022 8:26:00 PM

It seems "romance cast its spell," and Dwight thought this "lovely lady" was magically delicious. Such a cute limerick, Joseph. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/14/2022 1:41:00 AM

Wow. Loved the ending especially.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/13/2022 10:05:00 AM

Great one Joseph. Yes, I agree with Vijay. Perfect last line :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2022 5:27:00 AM

I like the humor--especially your ending line, Joseph.