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You said you hated me. I can take that for face value. You said you loved me. I can't take that coming from you. I shared my fears. You used them against me. I expressed my weakness'. You plucked at them gently. You managed to get in my thoughts, I allowed it. You hollowed out my heart, I involved it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/14/2016 2:28:00 PM
to take responsibility for what you did....produces maturity that cant be hid....because so much Love must be under the lid....these words touched me, you did that kid....lisanne, your words are simply amazing.....;)
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Lisanne Hassen
Date: 2/20/2016 10:41:00 PM
Thank you Eric, as always, very kind words that you add to my work. I appreciate you greatly for doing so.

Book: Shattered Sighs