At Belfry’s End

From near and far, I hear the bells
their clear tones ring an ancient hymn
from long ago, ‘oft sung by men
in pure white robes, at belfry’s end. 

I hadn’t heard the bells for years
for I had wandered far from home
their simple notes from long ago
were soon forgot, my soul grew cold. 

To hear these joyous bells again
resonates within my heart
with no avoidance on my part
and from them I will not depart. 

A rising reverence overtakes
my weariness, for in their sounds
the bells reach inwards, all around
restoring faith, where none was found. 

With plaintive chimes, the tolling bells
entreat me to believe and come
before His throne and praise the One
who bought me with His precious Son. 




Written 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/12/2023 11:26:00 AM
This is a "precious" pilgrimage, Laura! From silence to restoration. Congratulations on your win. It is a beautiful story. Advent blessings to you. Your poems of faith always bring me into a place of fellowship and sharing. Thank you for that gift.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/12/2023 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! I’m glad you were blessed by my simple poem! God bless you! :)
Date: 12/12/2023 9:16:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your placement in my contest! I can feel the touching tones as described. “from long ago, ‘oft sung by men in long white robes, at belfry’s end.” “I hadn’t heard those bells for years.” Comes the joyous bells again, warming you all over, restoring your faith. ~ Kim
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/12/2023 5:46:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest, Kim! I’m so happy you enjoyed my bpoem! God bless you this Christmas season! :)
Date: 12/8/2023 4:39:00 PM
Laura, I just love how you use the emblem of church bells to draw the reader into the deeper soul terrain of one's faith being renewed. God's Spirit can use so many avenues to bring restoration: the words of a hymn, the sight of a steeple, the smell of incense, the taste of communion elements. In this case, the one who "traveled far from home" hears the bells of childhood that "resonated in my heart". As Tom mentioned, these lines have impeccable cadence, which to me always represents carefully crafted thought. Beautiful, and a Fav for me. Love it! Hugs ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/8/2023 5:06:00 PM
Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments, as always, John! I always learn more from your critiques! And Im glad we can encourage one another to keep writing…especially through the dry spells! Thanks so much for the fav! I didn’t expect that! Hugs! :)
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John Watt
Date: 12/8/2023 4:41:00 PM
Good to see you posting... you and I have been going through quite the dry spell!
Date: 12/7/2023 2:09:00 PM
Ahhh!! Those church bells add a special touch to a town, home. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/7/2023 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your kind comments! There is a church in my mom’s hometown that chimes bells on the hour each day..they are so lovely to hear! :)
Date: 12/7/2023 5:36:00 AM
I'm not much for church bells but I'm all in for good poetry. The cadence is is remarkable, I picked up on it right away. And as per usual your faith is evident
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/7/2023 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! Sohappy you stopped by to comment..always a pleasure to hear from you! :)
Date: 12/7/2023 4:13:00 AM
Lovely poem Laura.. nice use of bells..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/7/2023 2:00:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! I’m always happy when you stop by to comment! :)
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