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Lost your tongue, as you fumble to recall the right words to use. I think of all the words that once flowed so freely, and where there were no words to fit, you simply made them up. Daft, silly, and fun. Vast vocabulary resonating at every opportunity. The scrabble board could even learn from you! At times jibes rasped from your tongue as sharp as a razor On the flip side and more reflective of you, Jolliness. Words danced from your mouth like Ginger Rogers or Rita Hayworth, swift and effortless. Your songbird melody as you sang songs of old or chimed sweet childhood rhymes.   Now, a blank page staring back awaiting its full stop.

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Date: 4/26/2018 12:59:00 PM
Sweet pathos here! Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/16/2018 5:45:00 PM
The 'unkindest cut of all' (ala Shakespeare's Julius Caesar) is not, as Caesar thought, a knife wound, but rather the loss of one's mind---as you so poignantly expressed. Kudos! Best wishes, Gershon Wolf
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:52:00 PM
Maybe Laura today is best forgot, and the memories of yesterday, worth remembering, that is entirely my opinion, also, i believe you write wonderful poetry
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Laura Hay
Date: 3/16/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Harry, today is always another day for sure. Thank you for your wonderful comment, its much appreciated. Kind Regards, Laura.
Date: 3/6/2018 8:43:00 AM
So sad, Laura. Age and time relentlessly march on, causing physical and emotional havoc. I've experienced these moments you write about, both with my grandparents and parents. Your poem pulls at the strings of my heart. It goes to my favs. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 3/6/2018 4:51:00 PM
It is a very emotional time and I'm sure even more so with parents. Sending hugs and thank you for your kind comments once again. Warm regards, Laura
Date: 2/28/2018 9:47:00 AM
This is so touching Laura.. my grandparents are also in their 90's, but ive not seen them for 8 years... they live in Canada..
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Laura Hay
Date: 3/6/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you SO. I have always been close with my Gran and it is so heart breaking at times when I visit now. Hoping you get a chance to see you grandparent again SO! Warm regards, Laura.
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Laura Hay
Date: 3/6/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you SO. I have always been close with my Gran and it is so heart breaking at times when I visit now. Hoping you get a chance to see you grandparent again SO! Warm regards, Laura.

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